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Hi Oscar,
Great topic and first scenario. Not sure why the image isn't displaying properly I had a quick look and everything seems ok. I inserted the same image I could see you tried to put in above your overview box.
I really like the focus questions that you have but I think the 3rd and 4th are going to a similar point being; how do you create positive self talk and how can you maintain it to your benefit?
You've gone straight for sports which is definitely what I would do. Perhaps it would be worth your while checking out other industries/ areas where there is high pressure in business, govt. or military?
I've been in the high performance sport area getting on for 10 years now so if you wanted to chat I'd be happy to.
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