Yes, that could be a good way to incorporate a cultural reference that is relevant here in Australia.
Generally, I think the structure is clear and the way you've introduced and explored this topic is relatable and useful. I especially enjoyed the lift scenario as I feel many of us have been here. U3081293 (discuss • contribs) 12:46, 15 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
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Hi there, I've read through your chapter and it looks like you have some great ideas! You include many different types of humour and psychological theories in your chapter, so I thought that using a quiz towards the end might be a fun way for readers to consolidate this knowledge and make sure they can distinguish between the multiple theories discussed. If you need a template for a quiz, you can look at the edit source page of my chapter and use that if you want to. The use of images throughout the sections of your chapter could also be a useful addition, as it adds some more colour and excitement for the reader to look at as they go through your chapter. Great work so far! --U3236447 (discuss • contribs) 03:33, 2 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
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Promising 2-level heading structure – could benefit from further refinement
The draft headings place too much emphasis on background concepts and too little on the relationship between the concepts
Adopt closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings
Definition(s) tend to be pedestrian headings. Incorporate definitional material into the Overview and/or subsequent sections with embedded inter-wiki link(s) to further information.
Key points are well developed for each section, with relevant citations
Avoid providing too much background information. Aim to briefly summarise general concepts and provide internal links to relevant book chapters and/or Wikipedia pages for further information. Then focus most of the content on directly answering the core question(s) posed by the chapter sub-title.
For sections which include sub-sections, include the key points for an overview paragraph prior to branching into the sub-headings
Strive for an integrated balance of the best psychological theory and research about this topic, with practical examples
Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters (see Tutorial 2)
Promising use of one or more scenarios/examples/case studies
Consider including one or more quiz question(s) about the take-home messages
Also consider using one or more tables to summarise key information
Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
posts about the unit or project on other platforms such as the UCLearn discussion forum or on X using the #emot24
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