Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Fogg behaviour model

Initial suggestions

@HannahMooney: Thanks for tackling this topic. Some initial suggestions:

• Check out other related chapters and see how you can build on, link to, and integrate with that work:
  • Category:Motivation and emotion/Book/Behaviour

• • Category:Motivation and emotion/Book/Motivation
• Also search past book chapters for related topics
• For the topic development, consider:
  • What psychological theory(ies) can help to understand and explain this topic?
  • What is the main research in this area?
• Let me know if I can do anything else to support the development of this chapter.

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 09:13, 11 August 2024 (UTC)

Topic development feedback

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1. Title The title and sub-title are correctly worded and formatted 2. Headings See earlier comment about Heading casing Promising 3-level heading structure Could benefit from either simplification (e.g., to 2-levels) or rebalancing (e.g., one section has lots of sub-headings, other sections have no sub-headings) The headings about social media / technology are a little confusing because this is part of the core topic, although these could provide useful examples/scenarios Avoid having sections with only 1 sub-heading – use 0 or 2+ sub-headings 3. Overview Excellent - Scenario, image, evocative description of the problem/topic, relevant psychological theory/research, and focus questions A scenario or case study is presented in a feature box with an image at the start of this section Simplify/abbreviate the description of the problem. Move detail into subsequent sections. Closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings is recommended 4. Key points Partial development of key points for some sections, with some relevant citations For sections which include sub-sections, include the key points for an overview paragraph prior to branching into the sub-headings Provide the big picture (e.g., in basic terms, what is the model?). The current notes about to be detail without context. Strive for an integrated balance of the best psychological theory and research about this topic, with practical examples It is unclear whether the best available psychological theory and research has been consulted in the preparation of this plan Use APA style 7th edition for citations I recommend using the Studiosity service and/or a service like Grammarly to help improve the quality of written expression because there are grammatical and spelling errors Conclusion (the most important section): Hasn't been developed What might the take-home, practical messages be? (What are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title and/or focus questions?) 5. Figure Excellent - A relevant figure is presented, captioned, and cited 6. Learning feature Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters Promising use of example(s)/case study(ies) Promising use of quiz question(s) Focus the quiz question(s) on the take-home messages for each focus question Also consider using one or more tables to summarise key information 7. References OK All references need to be cited in the text Are there any systematic reviews about this topic? Check and correct APA referencing style: capitalisation italicisation doi formatting include hyperlinked dois use dois where available instead of other links 8. Resources See also OK Identify more relevant Wikiversity links (past book chapters) Use sentence casing External links Excellent Use sentence casing 9. User page Good Description about self provided Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks. A link to the book chapter is provided At least three different types of contributions Second link doesn't go to direct comparison/evidence. For more info, see Making and summarising social contributions. Use a numbered list (see Tutorial 02) 10. Social contribution No comment

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:35, 20 August 2024 (UTC)