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The topic development submission has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is below, plus see the general feedback page. Please also check the page history for changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Marks are available via UCLearn. Marks are based on the latest version before the due date.
Promising 2-level heading structure – could benefit from further development by expanding the structure
Adopt closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings
Avoid having sections with only 1 sub-heading – use 0 or 2+ sub-headings
Definition(s) tend to be pedestrian headings. Incorporate definitional material into the Overview and/or subsequent sections with embedded inter-wiki link(s) to further information.
Basic development of key points for each section, with relevant citations
Avoid providing too much background information. Aim to briefly summarise general concepts and provide internal links to relevant book chapters and/or Wikipedia pages for further information. Then focus most of the content on directly answering the core question(s) posed by the chapter sub-title.
For sections which include sub-sections, include the key points for an overview paragraph prior to branching into the sub-headings
It is unclear whether the best available psychological theory and research has been consulted in the preparation of this plan
For example, consider referring to the concept of mortality salience
Replace citations to internet webpages with citations of peer-reviewed academic literature
Use APA style 7th edition for citations with three or more authors (i.e., FirstAuthor et al., year)
Conclusion (the most important section):
Under developed
What might the take-home, practical messages be? (What are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title and/or focus questions?)
One in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters used (see Tutorial 2)
Consider use of one or more scenarios/examples/case studies
Promising use of quiz question(s)
Focus the quiz question(s) on the take-home messages for each focus question
Also consider using one or more tables to summarise key information
Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
None summarised on user page with direct link(s) to evidence. This was explained in Tutorial 03. Looking ahead to the book chapter submission, see social contributions.