Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Self-determination theory and environmental activism

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Heading casing

Hi Zahra Karim. FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example:

Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory

Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development

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Topic development feedback

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The topic development submission has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is below, plus see the general feedback page. Please also check the page history for changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Marks are available via UCLearn. Marks are based on the latest version before the due date.

  1. The title and sub-title are correctly worded and formatted
  1. See earlier comment about Heading casing
  2. Headings are too broad. Focus on the topic: SDT and EA.
  3. Adopt closer alignment between sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings
  4. The Overview and Conclusion should not have sub-headings
  5. Use default heading formatting (i.e., avoid bold, italics, underline, changing the size etc.)
  1. A promising scenario or case study is presented in a feature box with an image at the start of this section
  2. A brief, evocative description of the problem/topic is provided
  3. Present focus questions in a feature box at the end of this section
  1. Promising development of key points for each section
  2. Excellent use of citations
  3. Strive for an integrated balance of the best psychological theory and research about this topic, with practical examples
  4. For sections which include sub-sections, include the key points for an overview paragraph prior to branching into the sub-headings
  5. Avoid providing too much background information. Aim to briefly summarise general concepts and provide internal links to relevant book chapters and/or Wikipedia pages for further information. Then focus most of the content on directly answering the core question(s) posed by the chapter sub-title.
  6. Does this plan include genAI content? If so, it needs to be acknowledged as such in the edit summaries, otherwise it violates academic integrity.
  7. Conclusion is underway
  8. What might the take-home, practical messages be? (What are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title and/or focus questions?)
  1. One or more relevant figure(s) presented and captioned
  2. The figure caption(s) could better explain how the image connects to key points being made in the main text
  3. Figure(s) are cited at least once in the main text
  1. Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters (see Tutorial 2)
  2. Promising use of one or more scenarios/examples/case studies
  3. Promising use of quiz question(s)
  4. Also consider using one or more tables to summarise key information
  1. Very good
  2. Are there any systematic reviews about this topic?
  3. Only include sources that you have consulted
  4. Check and correct APA referencing style:
    1. only hyperlink dois
    2. alphabetical order
    3. page numbers should be separated by an en-dash (–) rather than a hyphen (-)
  1. See also
    1. Excellent
  2. External links
    1. Excellent
    2. Move academic sources into references and cite in the chapter
    3. Use alphabetical order
  1. Very good
  2. Excellent description about self provided
  3. Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
  4. A link to the book chapter is provided
  1. Two out of three types of contributions made with with direct link(s) to evidence. The other type of contribution is making:
  2. One out of three types of contributions made with with direct link(s) to evidence. The other types of contribution are making:

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