Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Artificial intelligence empathy

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Topic development feedback

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The topic development submission has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is below, plus see the general feedback page. Please also check the page history for changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Marks are available via UCLearn. Marks are based on the latest version before the due date.

  1. The title and sub-title are correctly worded and formatted
  1. Basic, 1-level heading structure – could benefit from further development, perhaps using a 2-level structure
  2. Adopt closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings
  3. Aim for 3 to 6 top-level headings between the Overview and Conclusion, with up to a similar number of sub-headings for large sections
  4. The Overview and Conclusion should not have sub-headings
  1. A scenario or case study is presented in a feature box with an image at the start of this section
  2. A brief, evocative description of the problem/topic is planned
  3. Closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings is recommended
  1. No development
  2. It is unclear whether the best available psychological theory and research has been consulted in the preparation of this plan
  3. Conclusion (the most important section):
    1. Hasn't been developed
    2. What might the take-home, practical messages be? (What are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title and/or focus questions?)
  1. One or more relevant figure(s) is/are presented and captioned
  2. The figure caption(s) could better explain how the image connects to key points being made in the main text
  3. Figure(s) are cited at least once in the main text
  4. Cite each figure using APA style
  1. Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters (see Tutorial 2)
  2. Promising use of one or more scenarios/examples/case studies
  3. Promising use of quiz question(s)
  4. Focus the quiz question(s) on the take-home messages for each focus question
  5. Also consider using one or more tables to summarise key information
  1. Very good
  2. Well done on identifying a relevant scoping review
  3. Are there any systematic reviews about this topic?
  4. Check and correct APA referencing style:
    1. capitalisation
    2. italicisation
  5. There are likely to be relevant 2023 to 2024 references
  1. See also
    1. Excellent
  2. External links
    1. Excellent
  1. Very good
  2. Description about self provided
  3. Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
  4. A link to the book chapter is provided
  1. Good – two out of three types of contributions made with with direct link(s) to evidence. The other type of contribution is making:
    1. posts about the unit or project on other platforms such as the UCLearn discussion forum or on X using the #emot24

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 08:14, 24 August 2024 (UTC)Reply