Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Survivor guilt

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Images[edit source]

I noticed that there are no images yet, and on a quick search realised this would be a difficult on for you. However, perhaps searching for your survivors may help add a few. Here is a link to Wiki Commons that may help if you are struggling to find any.--U3167879 (discusscontribs) 21:53, 28 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Journal article[edit source]

Hi there. I found your topic very interesting and started to look into survivors guilt. I found a critical review article that would fit into the section on Holocaust survivors. The article is titled Survivor guilt: A critical review from the lens of the Holocaust, and the link is: Hope this helps you in completing your book chapter! --U3127020 (discusscontribs) 04:21, 14 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I found your points really interesting and am interested to learn more when you complete your book chapter. I came across this book when I was doing some research on survivor guilt for my internship and thought it may be of use to you. You can access the full copy online through the UC Library Search. It is also on Google Books. Hope this helps! 'Trauma and Recovery: The Aftermath of Violence--From Domestic Abuse to Political Terror' by J. Herman in 2015. U3187813 (discusscontribs) 04:33, 15 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments[edit source]

Hi, I really find your topic interesting and noticed you are going to expand on survivors of the Holocaust. Eddie Jaku, a Holocaust survivor, has recently passed away and I would recommend having a look at some resources surrounding him. He was said to be the happiest man on earth and his experiences as a survivor seem quite unique and oppose some research suggesting all survivors live unhappy lives. Here is a link to a news article with an overview of his life: Good luck! Rani u3190257

Hi! great topic and you have alot of interesting content, but I noticed that the in-text citations and reference list were light. It may be a bit late now, but here is a link: that has a wide range of resources and easily formatted citation generator --U3198955 (discusscontribs) 10:55, 17 October 2021 (UTC)U3198955[reply]

Heading casing[edit source]

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:14, 15 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Topic development feedback[edit source]

The topic development has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is provided below, plus there is a general feedback page. Please also check the chapter's page history to check for editing changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Topic development marks are available via UCLearn. Note that marks are based on what was available before the due date, whereas the comments may also be based on all material available at time of providing this feedback.

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Title[edit source]

  1. The title is correctly worded and formatted
  2. The sub-title is correctly worded and formatted
  3. On re-reading the original sub-title (Why do victims of trauma experience survivor guilt?) I think perhaps a better sub-title may be: Why do some survivors of trauma experience guilt? So, I've changed it. It's exactly the same topic, but hopefully slightly better wording.

User page[edit source]

  1. Excellent - used effectively
  2. Description about self provided
  3. Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
  4. Link provided to book chapter

Social contribution[edit source]

  1. Excellent - summarised with direct link(s) to evidence

Headings[edit source]

  1. Promising 2-level heading structure - could benefit from further development.
  2. Consider using more descriptive headings (rather than 1 or 2 words)

by expanding the structure

  1. Consider adding sub-headings for each of the major headings between Overview and Conclusion
  2. See earlier comment about Heading casing

Key points[edit source]

  1. Overview:
    1. I think too much core content is planned for this section. A lot of it could be moved into subsequent sections.
    2. Instead, provide a description of the problem and what will be covered
    3. Add focus questions
    4. Add an image
    5. Add an example or case study
  2. Direct quotes need page numbers (APA style) - even better, write in your own words
  3. What is survivor guilt - targetted section, makes sense
  4. Examples of focus questions and/or headings that might be useful: What is the prevalence of survivor guilt? How long does it last? What are its impacts? Who is most vulnerable? How can it be treated? How can it be prevented?
  5. The mind - too broad/vague - focus
  6. For sections which include sub-section include key points for an overview paragraph prior to branching into the sub-headings
  7. Theories - explain why these are the two most relevant theories. Are there are other theories of note? Perhaps also consider emotion theory about guilt more generally, and how this applies in the instance of survivor guilt.
  8. Survivors - some case studies would be useful and this section provides some examples that could be used. However, a major section dedicated to major events like this isn't needed. But the more that psychological theory can be applied to these examples and/or relevant research has been conducted, the more useful they could be.
  9. There seems to be reasonably good coverage of theory; strive to balance with review of relevant research
  10. Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters. This is particularly important for this chapter as there are several other chapters about closely related concepts.
  11. Conclusion (the most important section):
    1. under developed
    2. what might the take-home, practical messages be?
    3. in a nutshell, what are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title?

Figure[edit source]

  1. A figure is presented
  2. Caption formatting has been adjusted. Suggest adding "survivor guilt" for context. Needs page number for quote. Even better, write your own caption to explain how the image connects to key points being made in the main text.
  3. Cite each figure at least once in the main text

References[edit source]

  1. OK
  2. For APA referencing style, check and correct:
    1. capitalisation
    2. italicisation
    3. doi formatting
    4. separate page numbers by an en-dash (–) rather than a hyphen (-)

Resources[edit source]

  1. Excellent

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:14, 15 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

suggestion[edit source]

Hey! This is such a sad topic, and really hits home for me as I had a family friend lose his daughter in a car accident that he was driving :( It is really interesting in a morbid kind of way Anyway I have an interesting article that I think you should give a read, as far as i can see you haven't referenced it yet, --U3202984 (discusscontribs) 12:16, 15 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]