Hi U3186267, I've found the topic you've chosen keenly interesting since I am undertaking a similar unit for my degree called 'political leadership'. Topics such as participative leadership, leadership grid styles, and entrepreneurial leadership are fairly interesting in regards to your topic. All the best and I look forward to see what you find. --Robert.E.House (discuss • contribs) 06:21, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
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Well developed 2-level heading structure, with meaningful headings that directly relate to the core topic
The main challenge is to concentrate the bulk of the chapter on directly addressing the question: "How does leadership affect morale?". It makes sense to briefly explain the separate concepts of "leadership" and "morale" but the task is to focus on bringing these concepts together through review and integration of psychological theory and research.
Possibly it could make sense to describe the desired outcome (morale) and then how to get there (via leadership).
Currently, the most important section is "The relationship between leadership and morale" - look to develop and expand this section.
Key points are well developed for most sections, with relevant citations
Avoid providing too much background information. Briefly summarise general concepts and provide internal wiki links to other book chapters and/or Wikipedia pages for further information. Then focus most of the content of this chapter on directly answering the core question(s) posed by the chapter sub-title.
For sections which include sub-section include key points for an overview paragraph prior to branching into the sub-headings
Overview - Consider adding:
a description of the problem
an example or case study
There seems to be reasonably good coverage of theory; strive to balance with review of relevant research
Some use of in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters
Consider including more examples/case studies
Conclusion (the most important section):
what might the take-home, practical messages be?
in a nutshell, what are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title?