Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Eisenhower matrix and time management
Heading casing[edit source]
Hi! I am quite interested in your topic and from some quick research have found another resource you may enjoy reading and/or using. Jory MacKay has a blog about time management (I have placed two links in your working notes for ease) and an interesting question asked is if time management varies across cultures. I also added a link to SDT to help your chapter be a little interactive. Hope this suggestion help!--U3167879 (discuss • contribs) 12:36, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks! I have added these into my external links, super interesting content! Brianna Meddemmen (discuss • contribs) 09:31, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
|Hi Brianna Meddemmen. FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example:|
Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory
Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development
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Word Limit[edit source]
Hey there! I did a quick word count after proofing your chapter for any grammar and spelling mistakes (I didn't find many by the way!) and noticed you are already at 4084 words. I have a few suggestion for cutting down on the content to ensure you have enough spare words for your conclusion.
- Try adding dot points in your sections and this way you can cut out a lot of unnecessary extra sentence words.
- In the improving motivational lives section I think you can cut down on a lot of the info by linking to other chapters and wiki pages and just including a few short sentences and dot points?
- My book chapter mentions it a little https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2021/Cognitive_evaluation_theory_and_motivation and here is the link to a wikipedia page on SDT: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Self-determination_theory https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Self-determination_theory Another thing I noticed was the first figure is not referenced, I love your chapter and the interactive monopoly feature boxes, such a great idea! --Ashley Sanders01 (discuss • contribs) 00:47, 14 October 2021 (UTC)