User:Cora.boyle

About Me

I'm Cora Boyle, a third year Psych student. Here's a link to my book chapter: Cortical Activation Patterns and Emotion

Social Contributions

1. 18/10/16, 8:12PM Stress Recovery Theory: Suggested some sentence restructuring and also fixed grammatical and syntax areas. More evidence.
2. 18/10/16, 9:30PM Polyamory Motivation: Suggested some changes in sentence structure and some minor issues with italics and bold.
3. 18/10/16, 8:54PM Emotional Hijacking: Suggesting toning down coloured background, suggested fixing some errors in syntax and grammar, caught error in the quiz, and suggested changes to sentence structure.
4. 19/10/16, 5:08PM Illicit Drug Taking at Music Festivals: Suggested some changes in sentence structure, content, and make some grammatical changes. More evidence.
5. 19/10/16, 4:37PM Emotional Intelligence: Suggested some changes in sentence structure, adding a quiz, and made some grammatical and punctuation corrections. More evidence.
6. 19/10/16, 7:03PM Bullying and Social Needs: Suggested adding content, term change, structure change, sentence restructuring, and adding a quiz or case study.
7. 19/10/16, 7:18PM Chronic Illness Self-Management Motivation: Suggested sentence restructuring.
8. 19/10/16, 8:11PM Amygdala in Sport: Suggested separating topics by subheadings.
9. 20/10/16, 2:44PM Long-Term Goal Achievement: Pointed out that referencing and image captioning was incorrect and suggested ways of remedying this, made minor grammatical and punctuation edits, suggested sentence rewording and titling the activity section. More evidence.
10. 20/10/16, 04:20 (UTC) Anorexia Nervosa and Extrinsic Motivation: Suggested sentence restructuring, and adding to the See Also section
11. 20/10/16, 07:28 (UTC) Betrayal Motivation: Suggested changing sentence structure and titles, adding images, adding boxes, marked missing references, and added missing references. More evidence.
12. 20/10/16, 07:53 (UTC) Competition Fighting Motivation: Suggested shortening and changing sentences, adding images, adding in-text references, and linking to other wikipedia articles.
13. 20/10/16 (UTC) 08:18 Delayed Reinforcement and Motivation: Suggested adding images and making the case study stand out more, as well as changing size of titles to make sub-topics stand out more.
14. 20/10/16 08:58 (UTC) Water and Emotion: Suggested breaking overview up into subheadings, changing a few sentences, adding coloured boxes and images, separating theories by subheadings, and pointing out that references need to be fixed up. More evidence.
15. 20/10/16 09:07 (UTC) Unhealthy Food and Negative Emotion: Suggested cutting table size and/or making it more interesting/relevant, adding images, and content about the rise of obesity.
16. 21/10/16 23:21 (UTC) Rituals and Emotion: Suggested adding images, breaking up long sentences, and adding content.
17. 21/10/16 23:34 (UTC) Sexual Motivation and Hormones: Pointed out that images were captioned incorrectly, reminded author to add in-text references, and suggested adding coloured boxes or tables. More evidence.
18. 21/10/16 10:41AM Helped someone with using hyperlinks within boxes.
19. 21/10/16 23:58 (UTC) Mental Illness and Treatment Motivation: Suggested adding more relevant content, fixing table formatting, fixing quote formatting, adding coloured boxes, and sticking with one title style.
20. 23/10/16 01:25 (UTC) Athlete Doping: Suggested sentence restructuring and changes to overall structure.
21. 23/10/16 01:38 (UTC) Religious Radicalisation: Suggested sentence restructuring, changing the overview section, and rephrasing some sections. More evidence.
22. 23/10/16 02:00 (UTC) Laughter Yoga: Pointed out incorrect APA formatting and suggested adding images, tables or coloured boxes.
23. 23/10/16 02:12 (UTC) Cannabis and Anxiety: Made grammatical edits. More evidence.
24. 23/10/16 08:18 (UTC) Leisure Motivation: Suggested removing some repetitive phrases, and fixed some punctuation errors. More evidence.