Hey! I love this chapter - so interesting, do you do yoga yourself?
I would like to make a small recommendation; under the sub-heading 'what is laughter' you describe 'five types of laughter' in quite a long sentence, maybe consider using dot points here? --Sebastian Kelly (discuss • contribs) 02:11, 20 October 2016 (UTC)
APA standard is that numbers over 10 are written numerically. I would also suggest adding some images, tables, or putting content into coloured boxes to break up the text, as it is quite hard to look at for a long time.
--Jessann95 (discuss • contribs) 06:17, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
I have added a link to another wiki that is relevant, plus made some minor spelling and grammar changes. I also suggest that you put some of the text into coloured boxes. I have provided a template below
Apologies for late feedback (have extension so running behind) - for future reference I found this chapter really interesting and informative. Definitely carrying the desired theme of the book to enhance people's lives through understanding of motivation and emotion. I can see that you took the earlier advice provided to you on board and I think that it has served you well. The dot points make for much easier reading. Great work! --U944295 (discuss • contribs) 13:39, 3 November 2016 (UTC)
The Reeve (2015) textbook is over-used as a citation; preferably consult and cite primary, peer-reviewed sources.
Several very useful/relevant research studies are described. They tend to be described one after the other. To improve the review of research, look for patterns and themes and try to synthesise the findings in order to convey a greater depth of understanding.
Some statements were unreferenced (e.g., see the [factual?] tags)
When discussing important research findings, indicate the size of effects in addition to whether or not there was an effect or relationship.