Talk:WikiJournal of Medicine/Diagram of the pathways of human steroidogenesis
Häggström, M; Stannered; Hoffmeier; Settersr; Richfield, D.
anonymous peer reviewer ,
This review refers to this previous version of the article
Peer review sumitted as PDF
These are my comments from the peer review statement at File:Peer_review_statement_for_steroid_diagram_article_2014.pdf:
- Regarding title, I agree that the addition "Development of a..." is more explanatory, but I also like it to be succinct. Thus, the title is now changed to "enzymes, substrates and products" to simply "pathways".
- Regarding "Method", the phrase "collaborative work" is now changed to "work of multiple authors". I'm aware that the reader may possibly think that this is a novel presentation, but it is not stated that it is, and I don't think there is a necessity to assert the opposite.
- Regarding "Next Steps", the term "vector image" is now explained.