Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Work motivation and self-determination theory

Heading casing

Hi U3212278. FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example: Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development -- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:44, 15 August 2024 (UTC)

Topic development feedback

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1. Title The title and sub-title are correctly worded and formatted 2. Headings See earlier comment about Heading casing Basic, 1-level heading structure – could benefit from further development, perhaps using a 2-level structure Develop closer alignment between sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings Aim for 3 to 6 top-level headings between the Overview and Conclusion, with up to a similar number of sub-headings for large sections 3. Overview Basic Add an image to the scenario to help attract reader interest A description of the problem/topic is planned Keep it simple Closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings is recommended Open-ended focus questions are usually better than closed-ended (e.g., yes/no) questions 4. Key points Partial development of key points Basic use of citations Strive for an integrated balance of the best psychological theory and research about this topic, with practical examples It is unclear whether the best available psychological theory and research has been consulted in the preparation of this plan Conclusion (the most important section) hasn't been developed What might the take-home, practical messages be? (What are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title and/or focus questions?) 5. Figure One or more relevant figure(s) presented and captioned The figure caption(s) could better explain how the image connects to key points being made in the main text Cite each figure at least once in the main text using APA style (e.g., see Figure 1) 6. Learning feature Promising in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to relevant book chapters Basic use of scenario/example/case study Consider including one or more quiz question(s) about the take-home messages Also consider using one or more tables to summarise key information 7. References Good Are there any systematic reviews about this topic? Check and correct APA referencing style: Remove bullet-points page numbers should be separated by an en-dash (–) rather than a hyphen (-) None 8. Resources See also Excellent Use sentence casing External links Excellent Use sentence casing 9. User page Good Description about self provided Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks. A link to the book chapter is provided 10. Social contribution None summarised on user page with direct link(s) to evidence (see Tutorial 03). Looking ahead to the book chapter submission, see social contributions. To add direct links to evidence of Wikiversity edits or comments: view the page history, select the version of the page before and after your contributions, click "compare selected revisions", and paste the comparison URL on your user page. For more info, see Making and summarising social contributions. This was demonstrated in tutorials.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:23, 2 September 2024 (UTC)

Suggested studies

Hey, here are some more studies to get the ball rolling with your chapter.

Ryan, R. M., & Deci, E. L. (2024). Self-determination theory. In Encyclopedia of quality of life and well-being research (pp. 6229-6235). Cham: Springer International Publishing.

Legault, L. (2020). Self-determination theory. In Encyclopedia of personality and individual differences (pp. 4694-4702). Cham: Springer International Publishing.

Howard, J. L., Bureau, J. S., Guay, F., Chong, J. X., & Ryan, R. M. (2021). Student motivation and associated outcomes: A meta-analysis from self-determination theory. Perspectives on Psychological Science, 16(6), 1300-1323.

Ryan, R. M., & Deci, E. L. (2020). Intrinsic and extrinsic motivation from a self-determination theory perspective: Definitions, theory, practices, and future directions. Contemporary educational psychology, 61, 101860. Annabelle Taylor (discuss • contribs) 02:31, 25 September 2024 (UTC)

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Overall Overall, this is an insufficient chapter mainly because it lacks sufficient review of relevant research Reasonably good use of academic, peer-reviewed citations to support claims Well under the maximum word count, so there is room to expand For additional feedback, see the following comments and these copyedits Overview Solid Engages reader via a case study or scenario in a feature box; also include a relevant image Consider using the scenario to illustrate key components of SDT Clearly explains the problem or phenomenon Basic focus questions Use open-ended rather than closed-ended focus questions The focus questions are distributed throughout the chapter rather than being synthesised and presented at the end of the Overview Theory Basic coverage of relevant theory Builds somewhat on previous, related chapters and/or Wikipedia articles Basic depth is provided about relevant theory(ies) It would be helpful to point out that SDT is a macro theory which consists of half a dozen mini-theories Use tables, figures, and/or lists are to help convey key theoretical information Very basic use of examples to illustrate theoretical concepts; lacks depth Research Insufficient review of relevant research More detail about key studies would be ideal Any systematic reviews or meta-analyses in this area? Insufficient critical thinking about relevant research is evident Critical thinking about research could be further evidenced by: describing the methodology (e.g., sample, measures) in important studies discussing the direction of relationships considering the strength of relationships acknowledging limitations pointing out critiques/counterarguments suggesting specific directions for future research Integration Insufficient integration between theory and research The chapter places more emphasis on theory than on research Conclusion Basic summary and conclusion Add practical, take-home message(s) Style Written expression Overall, the quality of written expression is good Use 3rd person perspective (e.g., "it") rather than 1st (e.g., "we") or 2nd person (e.g., "you") perspective[1] in the main text, although 1st or 2nd person perspective can work well for case studies or feature boxes Layout Include an introductory paragraph before branching into the sub-sections (see tags) Avoid having a single sub-heading within a section Grammar The grammar for some sentences could be improved (e.g., see the tags) APA style Use sentence casing for the names of disorders, therapies, theories, etc. Use serial commas[2]. Video (1 min) Figures Figures are reasonably well captioned Each Figure is referred to at least once within the main text Refer to each Figure using APA style (e.g., do not use italics, check and correct capitalisation) Citations use very good APA style (7th ed.). For example: Use ampersand (&) inside parentheses and "and" outside parentheses References use reasonably good APA style: Check and correct use of capitalisation[3] Include hyperlinked dois (fixed) Remove numbers Learning features Basic use of learning features Excellent use of embedded in-text interwiki links to Wikipedia articles. Only link the first time the word/phrase is used. Basic use of image(s) Basic use of quiz(zes) and/or reflection question(s) Excellent use of interwiki links in the "See also" section Use alphabetical order Good use of external links in the "External links" section It would be ideal if these links were more specific to WM and SDT Use alphabetical order Social contribution ~7 logged, useful, minor social contributions with direct links to evidence

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 03:53, 13 October 2024 (UTC)