Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Sleep onset optimisation

Initial suggestions

@U3202982Isabelle: Thanks for tackling this topic. Some initial suggestions:

• Check out other related chapters and see how you can build on, link to, and integrate with that work:
  • Category:Motivation and emotion/Book/Relaxation
  • Category:Motivation and emotion/Book/Sleep
• Also search past book chapters for related topics
• For the topic development, consider:
  • What psychological theory(ies) can help to understand and explain this topic?
  • What is the main research in this area?Let me know if I can do anything else to support the development of this chapter.

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 09:27, 6 August 2024 (UTC)

Colons in headings

@U3202982Isabelle: I suggest removing the colons from the end of the headings. Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:47, 14 August 2024 (UTC)

Providing an idea

Hey there,

This is a very interesting topic for your book chapter. i have always found sleep to be an interesting topic when it comes to psychology. One of the reasons i am so interested in sleep is because i suffer from sleep apnea myself, which brings me back to your book chapter. I was wondering if maybe physiological factors such as sleep apnea will affect sleep onset. I have found this paper which might be interesting for you to look at:

-Chervin, R. D., & Aldrich, M. S. (2000). Sleep onset REM periods during multiple sleep latency tests in patients evaluated for sleep apnea. American journal of respiratory and critical care medicine, 161(2), 426-431.https://www.atsjournals.org/doi/full/10.1164/ajrccm.161.2.9905071

Good luck with your book chapter and the rest of semester.

kind regards HassanAlsamara (discuss • contribs) 22:59, 15 August 2024 (UTC)

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 08:46, 17 August 2024 (UTC)