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Promising development of key points for each section, with relevant citations
For sections which include sub-sections, include the key points for an overview paragraph prior to branching into the sub-headings
Avoid providing too much background information. Aim to briefly summarise general concepts and provide internal links to relevant book chapters and/or Wikipedia pages for further information. Then focus most of the content on directly answering the core question(s) posed by the chapter sub-title.
The definitional material about types of RPGs could be efficiently summarised in a table
Good balance of theory and research
Use APA style 7th edition for citations with three or more authors (i.e., FirstAuthor et al., year)
I recommend using the Studiosity service and/or a service like Grammarly to help improve the quality of written expression such as checking grammatical and spelling errors
Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters (see Tutorial 2)
Placeholder use of one or more scenarios/examples/case studies
Consider including one or more quiz question(s) about the take-home messages
Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.