Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Orthorexia and emotion

Initial suggestions

@U3222012: Thanks for tackling this topic. Some initial suggestions:

• Check out other related chapters and see how you can build on, link to, and integrate with that work:
  • Category:Motivation and emotion/Book/Eating
  • Category:Motivation and emotion/Book/Psychopathology
• What psychological theories can help to understand? What is the main research in this area?

Let me know if I can do anything else as you go along. Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:53, 9 August 2023 (UTC)

@U3229936: Thanks for picking up this topic. I've added a title placeholder and the categories mentioned above. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 00:43, 11 August 2024 (UTC)

Heading casing

Hi U3229936. FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example: Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development -- Jtneill - Talk - c 00:44, 11 August 2024 (UTC)

Nice topic

Orthorexia was a super interesting topic I looked into during a Nutrition Class. I specifically looked into the affects of Social media, could be something you explore as well. Annabelle Taylor (discuss • contribs) 09:14, 13 August 2024 (UTC)

Topic development feedback

The topic development submission has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is below, plus see the general feedback page. Please also check the page history for changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Marks are available via UCLearn. Marks are based on the latest version before the due date.

1. Title The title and/or sub-title were not correctly worded and/or formatted. This has been corrected. 2. Headings See earlier comment about Heading casing Promising 2-level heading structure – could benefit from further development A heading about eating disorders isn't necessary. Instead, briefly describe/compare/contrast orthorexia and then provide embedded links to related book chapters and/or Wikipedia articles for more info about EDs more generally and/or other specific EDs Reasonably good alignment between focus questions and heading structure, but consider closer alignment Avoid having sections with only 1 sub-heading – use 0 or 2+ sub-headings Quizzes don't need headings; concentrate quiz questions on the take-home messages in response to the sub-title/focus questions 3. Overview Excellent - Scenario, image, evocative description of the problem/topic, relevant psychological theory/research, and focus questions A scenario or case study is presented in a feature box at the start of this section Add an image to the scenario or case study to help attract reader interest A brief, evocative description of the problem/topic is provided Use 3rd person perspective (except 1st/2nd person can work for feature boxes/scenarios) Strive for close alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings Present focus questions in a feature box at the end of this section 4. Key points Promising development of key points for each section, with relevant citations Avoid providing too much background information. Aim to briefly summarise general concepts and provide internal links to relevant book chapters and/or Wikipedia pages for further information. Then focus most of the content on directly answering the core question(s) posed by the chapter sub-title. For sections which include sub-sections, include the key points for an overview paragraph prior to branching into the sub-headings Strive for an integrated balance of theory and research, with practical examples Where "individuals" is used, consider instead referring to "people" Generally well-written, but I recommend using the Studiosity service and/or a service like Grammarly to help improve the quality of written expression because there are grammatical errors. Conclusion (the most important section): Underway What might the take-home, practical messages be? (What are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title and/or focus questions?) 5. Figure A relevant figure is presented and captioned Caption could better explain how the image connects to key points being made in the main text Cite each figure at least once in the main text using APA style 6. Learning feature One use of in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters Promising use of example(s)/case study(ies) Promising use of quiz question(s) Promising use of table(s) 7. References Very good Are there any systematic reviews about this topic? For APA referencing style, check and correct: italicisation doi formatting make doi hyperlinks active (i.e., clickable) use dois where available instead of other links page numbers should be separated by an en-dash (–) rather than a hyphen (-) 8. Resources See also Not developed External links Not developed 9. User page Add description about self Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks. Add link to book chapter 10. Social contribution None summarised on user page with direct link(s) to evidence – this was covered in Tutorial 03. Looking ahead to the book chapter submission, see how to earn marks for social contributions.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 21:45, 18 August 2024 (UTC)

Interesting page :)

Hi, reading your chapter so far it looks like it flows really nicely and is very interesting. I think it’s kind of connected to my chapter topic on the gut-brain axis and emotion. I’ve come across an article you might find interesting that explains how starting a specific diet for “digestive issues” due to gut imbalances, can lead to orthorexia. If you’re interested, heres the link for the study https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1111/nmo.14427   U3239091 (discuss • contribs) 23:13, 26 September 2024 (UTC)