Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Inner voice and emotion

Topic development feedback

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1. Title The title and sub-title are correctly worded and formatted 2. Headings Promising 2-level heading structure – could benefit from further development Refine the structure to remove repetition / provide more specific/distinct headings Remove heading for focus questions (incorporate into Overview) Adopt closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings Avoid having sections with only 1 sub-heading – use 0 or 2+ sub-headings 3. Overview Move the scenario or case study into a feature box (with an image) to the start of this section to help catch reader interest Abbreviate the scenario (or split and distribute in more than one feature box throughout the chapter) A brief, evocative description of the problem/topic is provided Present focus questions in a feature box at the end of this section Closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings is recommended Open-ended focus questions are usually better than closed-ended (e.g., yes/no) questions 4. Key points Promising development of key points for each section, with relevant citations Strive for an integrated balance of the best psychological theory and research about this topic, with practical examples Use APA style 7th edition for citations with three or more authors (i.e., FirstAuthor et al., year) Conclusion (the most important section): Underway What might the take-home, practical messages be? (What are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title and/or focus questions?) 5. Figure A relevant figure is presented and captioned The Figure 1 caption provides a clear, appropriately detailed description that is meaningfully connected with the main text Cite each figure at least once in the main text using APA style 6. Learning feature One use of in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters Promising use of example(s)/case study(ies) Focus the quiz question(s) on the take-home messages for each focus question Also consider using one or more tables to summarise key information 7. References Very good Are there any systematic reviews about this topic? Check and correct APA referencing style: capitalisation 8. Resources See also Excellent External links Excellent 9. User page Good Brief description about self – consider expanding Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks. A link to the book chapter is provided 10. Social contribution One out of three types of contributions made with with direct link(s) to evidence The other types of contribution are making: comments on chapters (past or current) posts about the unit or project on other platforms Use a numbered list (see Tutorial 02)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:16, 19 August 2024 (UTC)