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The topic development submission has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is below, plus see the general feedback page. Please also check the page history for changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Marks are available via UCLearn. Marks are based on the latest version before the due date.
Excellent – key points are well developed for each section, with relevant citations
The main challenge is likely to be synthesising this chapter down to the maximum word count, since the topic development plan is basically already at that point. So, you'll need to very judicious in your choice of what to include (what is essential to address the focus questions using the best psychological science?) and what is interesting but not essential (to be left out)
Good balance of theory and research
Use APA style 7th edition for citations with three or more authors (i.e., FirstAuthor et al., year)
Direct quotes need page numbers (APA style) – even better, write in your own words
Conclusion (the most important section):
Well developed
What might the take-home, practical messages be? (What are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title and/or focus questions?)
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