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Excellent – key points are well developed for each section, with relevant citations
Great that you've identified cognitive evaluation theory - that is arguably the lynchpin in determining with ER enhances intrinsic or extrinsic motivation
The Reeve textbook is overused as a citation. Instead, go to original, peer-reviewed, academic sources.
For sections which include sub-sections, include the key points for an overview paragraph prior to branching into the sub-headings
Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.