Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/E-cigarette use motivation

DOI url

Hi there, I have enjoyed reading your page so far. One thing of note is in your APA 7 reference list I have noticed your missing the DOI url for the journal websites for your articles. Heres a link if you need a reminder for the layout :) https://libguides.jcu.edu.au/apa/reference-list --Jacqueline Di Fronzo (discuss • contribs) 03:07, 25 September 2024 (UTC)

Initial Thoughts

I think you have done well in your scope of research, I it's important to consider background and social influences when talking about smoking/vaping so well done. If you wanted to link your case study back to a section on adolescent vaping effects I have found this article on how nicotine effects the adolescent brain which I found interesting. You have done a great job! - Author Scarlet M U3229957 (discuss • contribs) 11:49, 15 August 2024 (UTC)

Topic development feedback

The topic development submission has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is below, plus see the general feedback page. Please also check the page history for changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Marks are available via UCLearn. Marks are based on the latest version before the due date.

1. Title The title and/or sub-title were not correctly worded and/or formatted. This has been corrected. User name removed – authorship is as per the list of topics and the page's editing history 2. Headings Promising 2-level heading structure – could benefit from further development by expanding the structure Remove the section about physical and mental health implications because it does not fit with the topic (see the sub-title). Instead, consider looking at ways of reducing e-cigarette motivation. Consider integrating theories earlier (rather than leaving until the end) Currently heading levels 2 and 5 are used; change this to level 2 and 3 Good alignment between focus questions and heading structure The Overview and Conclusion should not have sub-headings (fixed) Avoid having sections with only 1 sub-heading – use 0 or 2+ sub-headings (fixed) Case study doesn't need a separate heading; instead embed case study within relevant sections (fixed) 3. Overview Excellent - Scenario, image, evocative description of the problem/topic, relevant psychological theory/research, and focus questions A scenario or case study is presented in a feature box at the start of this section The scenario appears to be medically rather than psychologically/motivationally oriented - suggest revising Tailor brief, evocative description of the problem/topic to the motivational context Focus questions could be improved Consider unpacking the first question into some sub-questions 2nd question not relevant to the topic Consider adding a question about how motivation can be reduced 4. Key points Promising development of key points for each section, with relevant citations Links to citations should be in the reference list instead of the main list. Provide the dois as hyperlinks in the reference list. Currently the key points reflect the focus questions (good) but the focus questions should be refined to better address the question Strive for an integrated balance of the best psychological theory and research about this topic, with practical examples Conclusion (the most important section): Hasn't been developed What might the take-home, practical messages be? (What are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title and/or focus questions?) 5. Figure A relevant figure is presented, captioned, and cited Figure(s) are cited at least once in the main text 6. Learning feature Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters Promising use of example(s)/case study(ies) but the example(s) should be used to illustrate key points Consider including more examples/case studies, quiz question(s), table(s) etc. 7. References Very good Well done on identifying relevant systematic reviews and/or meta-analyses For APA referencing style, check and correct: capitalisation italicisation doi formatting page numbers should be separated by an en-dash (–) rather than a hyphen (-) 8. Resources See also One of two links provided Move external links to the external link section Use bullet-points (see Tutorial 02) Use sentence casing Include source in brackets after link Include "(Book chapter, year)" after links to other motivation and emotion book chapters on Wikiversity Also link to relevant Wikipedia pages External links Not developed 9. User page Created – minimal, but sufficient Very brief description about self – consider expanding Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks. Add link to book chapter 10. Social contribution No direct link(s) to evidence. This was explained in Tutorial 03. Looking ahead to the book chapter submission, see social contributions. Use a numbered list per Tutorial 02

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 05:13, 19 August 2024 (UTC)

Theory of Planned Behaviour

If your study Social Psychology this semester, it might be interesting to incorporate the theory of planned behaviour (TPB). I work in a primary school and majority of the kids that talk about vaping come from a low socio-economic status and with a parent(s) that also engage in the behaviour Annabelle Taylor (discuss • contribs) 00:54, 17 September 2024 (UTC)