Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Adverse childhood experiences and risk-taking motivation
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[edit source]Hey, I noticed that in your references you are using a dash, rather than an en-dash, which is required for APA 7th ed. referencing. (click 'here')
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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:56, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
Heading casing
[edit source]Hi Krobertsonn. FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example: Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development |
- Good evening @Jtneill,
- Throughout the content of my headings, if a source I use utilise capitalises every word for a specific thing (e.g. Behavioural Inhibition System) do I follow what they do? Or do I stick to the sentence casing and keep second words as lowercase? (e.g. Behavioural inhibition system). I would like to know this regarding my reference list as well, as some sources capitalise every word in their titles and others do not. Krobertsonn (discuss • contribs) 11:24, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- APA style is a "down" style e.g., see https://apastyle.apa.org/style-grammar-guidelines/capitalization for more info. Note the section about diseases etc. So, the correct capitalisation for your example is "behavioural inhibition system".
- Similarly, for APA style references, the title of the work should be in sentence casing (other than for proper nouns). The journal title uses capitalisation for the main words (e.g., Journal of Personality and Individual Differences). This means that you can't necessarily rely on the capitalisation in the original source. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:45, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
Guidance for further enhancement
[edit source]Hey Kira! I love this topic! anything to do with childhood experiences and adulthood behaviours is super interesting. You've made great progress so far! Here is some guidance on potential enhancement for your chapter!
I think discussing the psychological mechanisms behind risk taking behaviours can enhance your chapter. For example, when speaking on peer pressure and risk-taking, you could back this up with theories like social learning theory or attachment theory. I found an interesting study on social learning theory and promoting honesty amongst young children. This could be used to argue that although antisocial behaviour can be learned from observation, prosocial behaviour can also be observed and actioned. Here is the link: https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jecp.2017.11.003
Consider potentially speaking on ACE combined with other variables? This could be titled "who is most susceptible to ACE and later risk-taking behaviour?". This can allow for further exploration into what variables increase the likelihood of damaging future behaviours along with already being exposed to a damaging upbringing. I found a study you could use which focuses on ACE and environmental exposures (such as pollution) and neurocognitive outcomes. Here is the link: doi: 10.3390/toxics11030259
That brings me to my next suggestion of looking into the neurological implications of ACE which could then read to risk-taking behaviours, this would be really interesting! Even factors such as gender and age could influence these results which i think would be useful to touch on.
This is also a useful Ted Talk on ACE's which can be an external link for you chapter :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i0anFHqIuJc
Goodluck with your chapter! I'm sure you'll smash it :) Ashdruett (discuss • contribs) 04:02, 2 October 2024 (UTC)