Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Survival needs and motivation

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Case study suggestion[edit source]

When I read your book chapter title, my immediate thought was 'Bear Grylls'. I noticed you currently do not have a case study selection, perhaps Bear Grylls could represent the biological needs of survival in your book chapter.--U3039010 (discusscontribs) 13:27, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

I will also share that Bear Grylls is a British adventurer, who is well known for his wildlife survival skills in extreme environmental conditions. Bear Grylls also explains the importance of survival as well as the order of priority (water, food, shelter etc) that is needed to survive in that type of environment. (The preceding unsigned comment was added by [[User:{{{1}}}|{{{1}}}]] ([[User talk:{{{1}}}|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/{{{1}}}|contribs]]) )

Heading casing[edit source]

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FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example:

Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory

Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:30, 14 September 2021 (UTC)

Topic development feedback[edit source]

The topic development has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is provided below, plus there is a general feedback page. Please also check the chapter's page history to check for editing changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Topic development marks are available via UCLearn. Note that marks are based on what was available before the due date, whereas the comments may also be based on all material available at time of providing this feedback.

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Title[edit source]

  1. The title is correctly worded and formatted
  2. The sub-title is correctly worded and formatted

User page[edit source]

  1. Created - minimal, but sufficient
  2. Very brief description about self provided
  3. Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
  4. Link provided to book chapter

Social contribution[edit source]

  1. Excellent - summarised with direct link(s) to evidence

Headings[edit source]

  1. See earlier comment about Heading casing
  2. Overview was missing
  3. Basic, 2-level heading structure - could benefit from further development
  4. There is no need to cover social needs - this is not the focus of the chapter; can link to other chapters about such topics

Key points[edit source]

  1. Basic development of key points for some sections
  2. Consider models of needs which have simplified Maslow's hierarchy such as Alderfer's ERG theory
  3. For sections which include sub-section include key points for an overview paragraph prior to branching into the sub-headings
  4. Overview - Consider adding:
    1. a description of the problem and what will be covered
    2. focus questions
    3. an image
    4. an example or case study
  5. Strive to balance and integrate theory and research
  6. Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters. This is particularly important for this chapter as there are several other chapters about closely related concepts.
  7. Consider including more examples/case studies
  8. Conclusion (the most important section):
    1. hasn't been developed
    2. what might the take-home, practical messages be?
    3. in a nutshell, what are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title?

Figure[edit source]

  1. A figure is presented
  2. Add an APA style caption which starts with Figure X. ...
  3. Caption should better explain how the image connects to key points being made in the main text
  4. Cite each figure at least once in the main text
  5. Consider decreasing image size

References[edit source]

  1. Good
  2. For APA referencing style, check and correct:
    1. capitalisation
    2. italicisation

Resources[edit source]

  1. See also
    1. Very good
    2. Only link to chapters which are directly related to the current chapter
    3. Also link to relevant Wikipedia pages
  2. External links
    1. Only link to resources which are directly related to the current chapter
    2. Include source in brackets after link

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:30, 14 September 2021 (UTC)