Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Criminal profiling
Heading casing[edit source]
|Hi U3204463. FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example:|
Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory
Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development
Hey! I just made some spelling and grammar changes to your paper, looks great. I was wondering if racial profiling would be relevant to your paper? Goodluck [] 13/10/2021 4:15 (UTC)
Hi, the topic you have chosen is extremely interesting, it immediately caught my attention. The key points you have so far look great and are well thought out. I'm wondering if you have seen the show Criminal Minds?, it's all about criminal profiling and can give you great insight about your topic! --U3199141 (discuss • contribs) 04:53, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
Splitting Glossary and End of chapter Quiz[edit source]
Hello! I just finished going through your chapter and it is looking so interesting. I do have a very minor formatting suggestion but I think the layout of your chapter would flow better if the quiz and the glossary were separate. It will help the visual progression through your chapter. I also added an external link to a Podcast called Real Crime Profile. I think this could provide further details around the practical side of profiling as the podcast included multiple cases of a behavioural analyst profiling real crime cases. Hope this helps :) --U3203008 (discuss • contribs) 13:07, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
From U3187741: Hi, I really like your topic so far! I believe this article might be useful in expanding your key findings and limitations section!
Hi! I really enjoyed reading your chapter just now, I have a ted talk for you that could help you out! :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u2V0vOFexY4
Great start on your book chapter, and all the best as you keep chipping away at it! I do have a couple of pointers that I hope are helpful as you keep writing. Firstly, I know it's still in the early stages of drafting, but it is important to use a consistent style of referencing. If you do choose to go with the wikipedia referencing, footnotes go after a full stop like this. Here is a link to the wikipedia guide: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Citing_sources#Footnotes . Secondly, you might want to consider focussing on the question to remove unnecessary words. It is an application question, and as such, you might consider practical aspects of criminal profiling. Although this is a relatively old article, it might be helpful: https://doi.org/10.1002/bsl.2370040405 . Finally, I was a bit confused about the image in the first paragraph. Isn't criminal profiling concerned with behaviour rather than appearance? The image seems to suggest that it involves appearance of the offender too.
I hope these points help, and you have a rewarding end to the semester!
Topic development feedback[edit source]
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Quick note[edit source]
Hey, I'd just like to say that you've put in some great effort into your topic! It can be a pretty precarious one but you've handled it quite well. I also found it rather interesting. As a previous suggestion mentioned, when using footnotes, make sure punctuation is before the reference (e.g., 'criminality.'). I've made that mistake too. I've taken the liberty of fixing three of the ones I could see for you. Best of luck with it, and the rest of your units this semester --Robert.E.House (discuss • contribs) 10:53, 17 October 2021 (UTC)