Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Amusement

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Topic development feedback[edit source]

The topic development has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is provided below, plus there is a general feedback page. Please also check the chapter's page history to check for editing changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Topic development marks are available via UCLearn. Note that marks are based on what was available before the due date, whereas the comments may also be based on all material available at time of providing this feedback.

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Title[edit source]

  1. The title is correctly worded and formatted
  2. The sub-title is correctly worded and formatted

User page[edit source]

  1. Excellent - used effectively
  2. Description about self provided
  3. Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
  4. Link provided to book chapter

Social contribution[edit source]

  1. Summarised with indirect link(s) to evidence
  2. Add direct links to evidence. To do this: View the page history, select the version of the page before and after your contributions, click "compare selected revisions", and then use this website address as a direct link to evidence for listing on your user page. For more info, see Making and summarising social contributions.

Headings[edit source]

  1. Minimalistic, 1-level heading structure
  2. It would make logical sense to use the sub-title questions as stop-level headings. Then consider further development of sub-headings in those sections.

Key points[edit source]

  1. Basic development of key points for each section, with relevant citations
  2. Overview - Consider adding:
    1. a description of the problem and what will be covered
    2. focus questions
    3. an image
    4. an example or case study
  3. Direct quotes need page numbers (APA style) - even better, write in your own words
  4. Perhaps discuss and consider schadenfreude as a type of amusement
  5. Amusement could also be discussed in relation to curiousity and the emotion of interest
  6. Strive for an integrated balance of theory and research
  7. Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters. This is particularly important for this chapter as there are several other chapters about closely related concepts.
  8. Consider including more examples/case studies
  9. Cite each reference at least once in the main text.
  10. Conclusion (the most important section):
    1. under developed
    2. what might the take-home, practical messages be?
    3. in a nutshell, what are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title?

Figure[edit source]

  1. Excellent
  2. Caption explains how the image connects to key points being made in the main text
  3. Cite each figure at least once in the main text

References[edit source]

  1. OK
  2. For APA referencing style, check and correct:
    1. capitalisation
    2. italicisation
    3. volume and issue formatting
    4. page number formatting
    5. doi formatting

Resources[edit source]

  1. See also
    1. Excellent
    2. Also link to relevant book chapters
  2. External links
    1. Excellent

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:01, 14 September 2021 (UTC)