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Basic development of key points for each section, with relevant citations
Overview - Consider adding:
a description of the problem and what will be covered
an example or case study
Direct quotes need page numbers (APA style) - even better, write in your own words
Perhaps discuss and consider schadenfreude as a type of amusement
Amusement could also be discussed in relation to curiousity and the emotion of interest
Strive for an integrated balance of theory and research
Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters. This is particularly important for this chapter as there are several other chapters about closely related concepts.
Consider including more examples/case studies
Cite each reference at least once in the main text.
Conclusion (the most important section):
what might the take-home, practical messages be?
in a nutshell, what are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title?