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Excellent - summarised with direct link(s) to evidence.
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Hi User:U3170318, there's some good information in the purple text box in the positive emotion section, but it may be a bit more readable in the form of a table, e.g. 1st column could be the emotion and second column would be details about it.
Also, the caption to Figure 2 showing the PERMA model may need a reference at the end of it if it has been adapted from somewhere else, i.e. Figure 2. Seligman’s PERMA Model of Well-being. Adapted from Author (year).
Overall, this chapter provides a basic overview of relevant research.
The critique of measurement is confusing - which measure(s) are being critiqued?
When describing important research findings, consider including a bit more detail about the methodology and indicating the size of effects in addition to whether or not there was an effect or relationship.
Great to see emphasis on one meta-analysis - more would be helpful.
Minimal use of embedded in-text interwiki links to Wikipedia articles. Adding more interwiki links for the first mention of key words and technical concepts would make the text more interactive. See example.
Minimal use of embedded in-text links to related book chapters. Embedding more in-text links to related book chapters helps to integrate this chapter into the broader book project.
Ideally, use in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters. Other links can be moved to the external links section.
Use double (not single) quotation marks "to introduce a word or phrase used as an ironic comment, as slang, or as an invented or coined expression; use quotation marks only for the first occurrence of the word or phrase, not for subsequent occurrences" (APA 7th ed., 2020, p. 159).
Refer to each Table and Figure at least once within the main text (e.g., see Figure 1).
Numbers under 10 should be written in words (e.g., five); numbers 10 and over should be written in numerals (e.g., 10).