Just wanted to flag the above feedback which James listed on another chapter. --DaleHulm (discuss • contribs) 16:02, 1 September 2019 (UTC)
It may be beneficial to expand more on the environmental factors of stress and diet. Really look forward to reading the chapter! - []
Hi, this research my be useful:
Obesity-related oxidative stress: the impact of physical activity and diet manipulation: Chun-Jung Huang., Matthew J. McAllister., Aaron L. Slusher., Heather E. Webb., J. Thomas MockEdmund., & O. Acevedo (2015).
--U3173638 (discuss • contribs) 03:24, 1 September 2019 (UTC)
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Sections which include sub-sections should also include an overview paragraph (which doesn't need a separate heading) before branching into the sub-headings.
Avoid providing too much background information. Instead, briefly summarise generic concepts and provide internal wiki links to further information. Then the focus of most of the content can be on directly answering the core question(s) posed by the chapter sub-title.
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Relevant research is well reviewed and discussed in relation to theory.
When describing important research findings, consider including a bit more detail about the methodology and indicate the size of effects in addition to whether or not there was an effect or relationship.
Greater emphasis on major reviews and/or meta-analyses would be helpful.