Hi, I am doing psychological flexibility and emotional health, and a big part of my research has been acceptance and commitment therapy (ACT). I think researching this would be a good addition to your topic to do with emotion regulation.
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I'm working on Affect regulation theory (ART) and there are a few theories that would go well with emotion regulation such as regulation theory, emotion regulation theory and self-regulation theory.
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Overall, this chapter does a reasonably good job of applying psychological theory and research to a real-world phenomenon, but it is undermined by the poor quality of written expression.
The chapter could benefit from further development of the Overview and Conclusion - it should be possible to only read these sections and get a good sense of why the topic is important and what is known/recommended.
Overall, this chapter provides a good overview of relevant research.
When describing important research findings, consider including a bit more detail about the methodology and indicate the size of effects in addition to whether or not there was an effect or relationship.
Greater emphasis on major reviews and/or meta-analyses would be helpful.
Some claims are unreferenced (e.g., see the [factual?] tags).