FYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for lower-cased headings (or sentence casing). For example, use:
==Cats and dogs==
==Cats and Dogs==
-- Jtneill - 22:39, 28 September 2019 (UTC)
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Hi there! I looked into an evolutionary emotion theory and thought it might be helpful with your topic. This link has a basic definition is you are interested:
https://www.verywellmind.com/theories-of-emotion-2795717 U3178428 ( discuss • contribs) 11:17, 20 October 2019 (UTC)
The topic development has been reviewed according to the
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Capitalisation and content of the title/sub-title has been corrected to be consistent with the book table of contents
Created, with description about self
Add link to book chapter
Summarised with indirect links to evidence.
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Reconsider use of "Darwinian"; topic focuses on "evolutionary"
See earlier comment about
Heading casing. Basic, 2-level heading structure - could benefit from further development.
Sections which include sub-sections should also include an overview paragraph (which doesn't need a separate heading) before branching into the sub-headings.
Perhaps consider the argument that humans aren't designed to be happy and the pursuit of happiness is a cultural fabrication based on a "cult of the self".
Basic development of key points for most sections, with relevant citations.
interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters. Consider introducing a case study in the Overview.
Consider including more examples/case studies.
Consider embedding one quiz question per major section.
An image (figure) is presented.
Caption uses APA style.
Caption could better explain how the image connects to key points being made in the main text.
Cite each figure at least once in the main text.
For full APA style:
Use the new recommended format for dois - http://blog.apastyle.org/apastyle/2014/07/how-to-use-the-new-doi-format-in-apa-style.html - instead of login/paywall links
Good External links
Jtneill - 22:39, 28 September 2019 (UTC)
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Overall, this chapter does a reasonably good job of applying psychological theory and research to a real-world phenomenon.
This chapter is well under the
maximum word count, so it could go into more depth. For additional feedback, see following comments and these copyedits.
Relevant theory is described and explained.
Could be covered in more depth.
Some relevant research is discussed.
When describing important research findings, consider including a bit more detail about the methodology and indicate the size of effects in addition to whether or not there was an effect or relationship.
Greater emphasis on major reviews and/or meta-analyses would be helpful.
Overall, the quality of written expression is very good.
Use active rather than passive voice
. Some paragraphs are overly long. Each paragraph should communicate one key idea in three to five sentences.
The chapter would benefit from a more developed Overview, with clearer focus question(s).
Avoid having sections with only one sub-section.
Sections which include sub-sections should also include an introductory paragraph (which doesn't need a separate heading) before branching into the sub-headings. Learning features
No embedded use of
interwiki links to Wikipedia articles. Adding interwiki links for the first mention of key words and technical concepts would make the text more interactive. No use of embedded links to related
book chapters. Embedding links links to related book chapters helps to integrate this chapter into the broader book project. Basic use of images.
No use of tables.
No use of feature boxes.
No use of quizzes.
No use of case studies or examples. Grammar
The grammar for some sentences could be improved (e.g., see the tags). Spelling
Spelling can be improved (e.g., see the
tags). Use Australian spelling (e.g., hypothesize vs. hypothesise; behavior vs. behaviour; fulfillment vs. fulfilment). Proofreading
Remove unnecessary capitalisation (e.g., Western Society). APA style
Numbers under 10 should be written in words (e.g., five); numbers 10 and over should be written in numerals (e.g., 10).
Figures and tables
Refer to each Table and Figure at least once within the main text (e.g., see Figure 1). Citations use correct APA style.
References are not in full APA style. For example:
Check and correct use of capitalisation.
Check and correct use of italicisation.
See new doi format.
~1 logged social contributions without direct links to evidence
Jtneill - 05:20, 22 November 2019 (UTC)
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Overall, this is an excellent presentation.
This presentation makes effective use of powtoon.
The presentation is over the maximum time limit - content beyond 3 mins is ignored for marking purposes.
An appropriate amount of content is presented - not too much or too little.
The presentation is well structured.
Add and narrate an Overview slide (e.g., with focus questions), to help orientate the viewer about what will be covered.
A Conclusion slide is presented.
What are the practical take-home message(s) that we can use to help improve our everyday lives?
The presentation is fun, easy to follow, and interesting to watch and listen to.
The presentation makes effective use of text and image based slides with narrated audio.
Well paced. Excellent pauses between sentences. This helps the viewer to cognitively digest the information that has just been presented before moving on to the next point.
intonation to enhance listener interest and engagement. The font size is sufficiently large to make it easy to read.
The visual communication is effectively supplemented by images.
The chapter title and sub-title are used in the video title - this helps to clearly convey the purpose of the presentation.
The chapter title and sub-title are used on the opening slide - this helps to clearly convey the purpose of the presentation.
Audio recording quality was very good.
Visual display quality was excellent.
Image sources are provided.
A copyright license for the presentation is provided.
A link to the book chapter is provided.
A link from the book chapter is provided.
A written description of the presentation is provided.
Jtneill - 05:29, 22 November 2019 (UTC)
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