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Basic, 2-level heading structure - could benefit from further development
Sections which include sub-sections should also include an overview paragraph (which doesn't need a separate heading) before branching into the sub-headings.
Avoid providing too much background information. Instead, briefly summarise generic concepts and provide internal wiki links to further information. Then the focus of most of the content can be on directly answering the core question(s) posed by the chapter sub-title.
Hey there! looks like you have some really good ideas for your chapter, I'm excited to see where you go with it. I noticed that you haven't yet included any examples or case studies. If you don't have any in mind I wanted to suggest burn victim Turia Pitt. Something that makes her different from other possible case studies is that there is endless amount of information on her experience. Turia has her own website and has written 4 different books (I've linked below) detailing her entire story. These would contain a lot about the emotions she went through so I figure she could be a really great person to highlight in your chapter.
Good evening! I like the way you have set out your page with headings and sub-headings. I'm interested to see how your page is going to look/read when you are finished! I found a couple of articles that I thought you might be able to find useful in your research on the topic:
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC509350/ (psychosocial aspects of burn injuries).
Izard, C. E. (2010) The many meanings/aspects of emotion: definitions, functions, activation, and regulation. Emotion Review, 2, 363-370. Retrieved from https://journals.sagepub.com/doi/pdf/10.1177/1754073910374661
I hope these help, good luck! --MPollard10 (discuss • contribs) 10:08, 16 October 2019 (UTC)
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Basic but sufficient coverage of research involving the relation between the target constructs is provided. More depth of research review could be provided (e.g., there is no indepth discussion of the top research studies in this area).
Consider describing the research outcomes for the various forms of intervention.
When describing important research findings, consider including a bit more detail about the methodology and indicate the size of effects in addition to whether or not there was an effect or relationship.
Greater emphasis on major reviews and/or meta-analyses would be helpful.