Your topic looks very interesting, I look forward to seeing the finished product. Just a suggestion for how your page is set up, you can place images on either the left, ride or centre of the page. All you have to do is click the image whilst in edit mode, select edit, advanced and then position. Just thought this might be a helpful suggestion to help break up your page a bit and make it look more visually appeasing. --Abbsu3163507 (discuss • contribs) 06:04, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
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This seems like a fantastic topic. Although, you aren't far into the development, you seem in need of some improvements on your APA formatting. This is a link to UC's referencing page: https://canberra.libguides.com/referencing/apa . This is always very helpful for me.
I also suggest that you limit your links in the 'Also See' section, as it will drain your word count. Try to just use links that are essential to your page or add valuable information that the reader may be seeking. Keep up the great work TaylorMal (discuss • contribs)
Research coverage is light - citations and basic descriptions are provided, but there is a lack of detail and critical consideration.
Did you consult sources such as Yerkes and Dodson (1908)? If not, this should be a secondary citation.
When describing important research findings, consider including a bit more detail about the methodology and indicate the size of effects in addition to whether or not there was an effect or relationship.
Greater emphasis on major reviews and meta-analyses would be helpful.