Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2017/Goose bumps and emotion

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Related chapter and articles[edit]

Hey, I've just added a link to your chapter on the Awe and well-being page because awe has been linked with goosebumps. These studies explore the relationship between emotions and goosebumps and might be useful for your chapter:

Schurtz, D. R., Blincoe, S., Smith, R. H., Powell, C. A., Combs, D. J., & Kim, S. H. (2012). Exploring the social aspects of goose bumps and their role in awe and envy. Motivation and Emotion, 36, 205-217.

Maruskin, L. A., Thrash, T. M., & Elliot, A. J. (2012). The chills as a psychological construct: content universe, factor structure, affective composition, elicitors, trait antecedents, and consequences. Journal of Personality and Social Psychology, 103, 135.

Also just made some formatting/grammar changes you can review here

--u3122707 (discusscontribs) 05:19, 9 September 2017 (UTC)

Hello! I thought I would add the Emotional chills book chapter to your 'see also' section, as it seems related to your topic, and i noticed you had not included any links to other book chapters just yet. Hope this helps :) --SL96 (discusscontribs) 06:52, 12 October 2017 (UTC)

Heading casing[edit]

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FYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for lower-cased headings. For example, use:

==Cats and dogs==

rather than

==Cats and Dogs==

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 00:59, 10 October 2017 (UTC)

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Title, sub-title, TOC[edit]

  1. good
  2. Another user has corrected the heading casing

User page[edit]

  1. Used effectively

Social contribution[edit]

  1. None provided

Section headings[edit]

  1. A section should contain either 0 or 2+ sub-sections - avoid having sections which contain 1 sub-section.
  2. Another user has corrected the capitalisation

Key points[edit]

  1. Good overall plan
  2. Note to avoid providing too much generic content about emotion - brief overview is OK, but link out to other material for additional generic information. This chapter should focus instead on the relation between GB and emotion.


  1. Excellent selection of images
  2. Figure 2 has an excellent caption
  3. Consider increasing image size (example provided with Figure 1)


  1. For APA style, check capitalisation, spelling, do not include retrieval date, use of italics, and do not include issue numbers for journals which are continuously numbered within a volume


  1. See also
    1. Excellent
  2. External links
    1. Not provided

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 00:59, 10 October 2017 (UTC)