Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2017/Emotional chills

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Journal article[edit]

Hey, here's another journal article for your chapter:

Maruskin, L. A., Thrash, T. M., & Elliot, A. J. (2012). The chills as a psychological construct: content universe, factor structure, affective composition, elicitors, trait antecedents, and consequences. Journal of Personality and Social Psychology, 103, 135.

All the best --u3122707 (discusscontribs) 03:40, 10 September 2017 (UTC)

Hey, here's another brief article and a link to an interesting study examining brain differences in people who experience emotional chills in response to music --u3122707 (discusscontribs) 07:11, 12 October 2017 (UTC)

Hi, I found a journal article that may help with your research. It investigates the brain structures involved with emotional chills using fMRI activation which may be interesting to discuss in your chapter. Hope you find it helpful, it seems like a really interesting topic! Here is the article: The Role of Left Hemispheric Structures for Emotional Processing as a Monitor of Bodily Reaction and Felt Chill – a Case-Control Functional Imaging Study --SL96 (discusscontribs) 06:39, 12 September 2017 (UTC)

Heading casing[edit]

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FYI, the convention on Wikiversity is for lower-cased headings. For example, use:

==Cats and dogs==

rather than

==Cats and Dogs==

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:25, 12 October 2017 (UTC)

Topic development review and feedback

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Title, sub-title, TOC[edit]

  1. Excellent

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Social contribution[edit]

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Section headings[edit]

  1. A simple, top-level structure is provided
  2. Standard sections included
  3. Consider using a more fine-grained structure e.g., involving sub-headings for key sections
  4. See earlier comment about heading casing

Key points[edit]

  1. Some good awareness of the scope of relevant theory and research is evident
  2. Promising use of quiz questions as a form of interactivity (e.g., one key per major section can work well)
  3. Practical tips
  4. Add interwiki in-text links for key terms


  1. An image used effectively with meaningful caption
  2. Consider increasing default image size


  1. Very good
  2. For full APA style, use italics
  3. Use the new recommended format for dois -
  4. Do not include issue numbers for journals which are continuously numbered within a volume


  1. See also
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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:25, 12 October 2017 (UTC)