You mentioned that conspiracies often have alternative explanations for events attributed to covert actions by powerful entities. Perhaps you could discuss how the “powerful entities” theory is often a racist one, whereby they are often perceived to be certain minority groups. For example, conspiracies often have theories about a “Jewish cabal”, thereby being antisemitic/racist.--MT200107 (discuss • contribs) 03:19, 18 August 2023 (UTC)Reply
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Hello, I find this topic really fascinating, I love to see the emphasis placed on all the cognitive elements of conspiracy theory belief. Further to the point of echo-chambers in confirming peoples' pre-existing beliefs, I found this TED talk from the perspective of a man who used to believe in the conspiracy that birds were full of surveillance equipment fascinating, as he exposes the cognitive dissonance and confirmation bias discussed https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3VEkzweBJPM
Hi Vanessa, not really a suggestion more an encouragement. I had a read of your overview and your chapter is sounding very interesting! I didn't know about the chemtrails theory! I am looking forward to coming back over the next few weeks to learn more! - Rachael. --U3218323 (discuss • contribs) 09:20, 16 August 2023 (UTC)Reply
Hi there,
Your overview section is really engaging. I was immediately drawn to the case study and this also kept me reading. It does sound like a really interesting topic. I find flat-Earth conspiracies amusing but interesting at the same time, so here's link to an article from the Conversation. It is hard to argue about beliefs but Adam Grant does shed some light on it in his book 'Think Again'. He also mentions cognitive dissonance as a concept relevant to conspiracy theorists and how their beliefs get stronger.
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Note to watch out for lumping people into "conspiracy theorists" or not; we probably all belief some conspiracy theory to some extent (so it may be more like a continuum)
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