Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/What the hell effect

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Topic development feedback[edit source]

The topic development has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is provided below, plus there is a general feedback page. Please also check the chapter's page history to check for editing changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Topic development marks are available via UCLearn. Note that marks are based on what was available before the due date, whereas the comments may also be based on all material available at time of providing this feedback.

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Title[edit source]

  1. The title is correctly worded and formatted
  2. The sub-title is correctly worded and formatted

User page[edit source]

  1. Excellent - used effectively
  2. Description about self provided
  3. Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
  4. Link provided to book chapter

Social contribution[edit source]

  1. Great to see you on Twitter!
  2. Wikiversity contributions summarised with indirect link(s) to evidence
  3. Add direct links to evidence. To do this: View the page history, select the version of the page before and after your contributions, click "compare selected revisions", and then use this website address as a direct link to evidence for listing on your user page. For more info, see Making and summarising social contributions.

Headings[edit source]

  1. Promising 2-level heading structure - perhaps could benefit from further development by expanding the structure
  2. Good use of questions as headings
  3. The section "What are some directions for future research?" isn't needed - but could be included. The key is to provide an integrated overview of relevant psychological theory and research, with practical applications.

Key points[edit source]

  1. Promising development of key points for each section, with relevant citations
  2. Main suggestion is to further develop the motivational theory and research
  3. Overview:
    1. Excellent use of opening scenario
    2. good description of the problem and what will be covered, including focus questions
    3. consider adding an image
  4. Direct quotes need page numbers (APA style) - even better, write in your own words
  5. Consider including more non-eating examples/case studies (e.g., alcohol, gambling)
  6. Conclusion (the most important section):
    1. hasn't been developed
    2. what might the take-home, practical messages be?
    3. in a nutshell, what are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title?

Figure[edit source]

  1. Excellent - one of the best explanatory captions for an image I've seen Smiley.svg
  2. Cite each figure at least once in the main text

References[edit source]

  1. OK
  2. For APA referencing style, check and correct:
    1. capitalisation
    2. italicisation
    3. doi formatting
    4. page numbers

Resources[edit source]

  1. Excellent

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 09:36, 14 September 2021 (UTC)