Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Non-English emotion words
Hi there, chapter looks awesome well done. The only edit that I saw may need changing was the "Table 2. Selected body-emotion Aboriginal expressions of emotion", which was a different font to your other tables. Otherwise good job :) --U3198955 (discuss • contribs) 09:37, 17 October 2021 (UTC)U3198955
Heyyyyyy! Wow your book chapter is SO GOOD! I especially love how interactive it is and how it includes a link to a youtube video (I'm gonna steal this idea lol) as well as the ability for readers to contribute. If I had to grade you I'd give you 100/100. WELL DONE! --Gracehowie (discuss • contribs) 06:45, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
Hi there, hope you don't mind but I made a few small grammatical adjustments (commas/apostrophes etc) - another note: make sure any research cited also includes a year of publication, I noticed a few mentions of Ekman and Lomas that had no date but didn't want to guess at these from your reference list. A really interesting topic I enjoyed reading it. --U3194580 (discuss • contribs) 12:20, 13 October 2021 (UTC)
Hi! I found this topic extremely interesting and felt engaged throughout. My favourite part was the reader contributions at the end - that is a really smart idea. IsabellaMont
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