Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Malingering motivation

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Heading casing[edit source]

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FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example:

Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory

Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:27, 14 September 2021 (UTC)

Topic development feedback[edit source]

The topic development has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is provided below, plus there is a general feedback page. Please also check the chapter's page history to check for editing changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Topic development marks are available via UCLearn. Note that marks are based on what was available before the due date, whereas the comments may also be based on all material available at time of providing this feedback.

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Title[edit source]

  1. The title is correctly worded
  2. The sub-title is correctly worded and formatted
  3. Capitalisation of the title has been corrected to be consistent with the book table of contents

User page[edit source]

  1. Created - minimal, but sufficient
  2. Brief description about self provided
  3. Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
  4. Link provided to book chapter

Social contribution[edit source]

  1. Add direct links to evidence. To do this: View the page history, select the version of the page before and after your contributions, click "compare selected revisions", and then use this website address as a direct link to evidence for listing on your user page. For more info, see Making and summarising social contributions.

Headings[edit source]

  1. See earlier comment about Heading casing
  2. Avoid having sections with 1 sub-heading - use 0 or 2+ sub-headings
  3. Promising 2-level heading structure - could be improved by concentrating the structure around the motivations for malingering

Key points[edit source]

  1. Overview - Consider adding:
    1. a description of the problem
    2. an image
    3. an example or case study
  2. What is the prevalence of malingering?
  3. What about subclinical malingering? (e.g., doesn't everyone exaggerate their symptoms at some point to gain extra attention, sympathy, time off work etc.?)
  4. Excellent use of examples/case studies. However, the Coppola case study needs to be abbreviated.
  5. Good emphasis on practical solutions and strategies
  1. Key points are well developed for each section, with relevant citations
  2. Promising development of key points for each section, with relevant citations
  3. Basic development of key points for each section, with relevant citations
  4. Use bullet points (see Tutorial 1 - Using Wikiversity)
  5. For sections which include sub-section include key points for an overview paragraph prior to branching into the sub-headings
  6. Good balance of theory and research
  7. Good use of in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters
  8. Conclusion (the most important section):
    1. well developed
    2. emphasise the take-home message in response to the sub-title question
    3. what does malingering tell/show us about motivation - why do people malinger? and what can be done about it?

Figure[edit source]

  1. Excellent
  2. Well done on creating and uploading your own image! Smiley.svg
  3. Caption explains how the image connects to key points being made in the main text
  4. Cite each figure at least once in the main text

References[edit source]

  1. Good
  2. For APA referencing style, check and correct:
    1. capitalisation
    2. italicisation
    3. separate page numbers by an en-dash (–) rather than a hyphen (-)

Resources[edit source]

  1. None provided

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:27, 14 September 2021 (UTC)