Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Feedback and motivation

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Topic development feedback[edit source]

The topic development has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is provided below, plus there is a general feedback page. Please also check the chapter's page history to check for editing changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Topic development marks are available via UCLearn. Note that marks are based on what was available before the due date, whereas the comments may also be based on all material available at time of providing this feedback.

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Title[edit source]

  1. Excellent

User page[edit source]

  1. Excellent - used effectively
  2. Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
  3. Link provided to book chapter

Social contribution[edit source]

  1. Excellent - summarised with direct link(s) to evidence.
  2. Use a numbered list.

Headings[edit source]

  1. Promising 2-level heading structure - could benefit from further development.
  2. The 4.1 sub-sections could be brought up one level.
  3. Separate theory and research sections may work - but also consider providing integrated theory and research sections based on key themes/topics.

Key points[edit source]

  1. Overview is friendly/accessible. Consider adding:
    1. focus questions
    2. an image
    3. an example or case study
  2. Write using 3rd person perspective.
  3. Promising use of case studies.
  4. As the chapter plan goes on, there is less detail.
  5. Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters.
  6. Conclusion (the most important section):
    1. hasn't been developed
    2. what might the take-home, practical messages be?
    3. in a nutshell, what are the answer(s) to the question in the sub-title?

Figure[edit source]

  1. A figure is presented.
  2. Caption
    1. for APA style, Figure # should be italics.
    2. explains how the image connects to key points being made in the main text.
  3. Cite each figure at least once in the main text.

References[edit source]

  1. Very good
  2. For APA referencing style, check and correct:
    1. capitalisation

Resources[edit source]

  1. Use sentence casing
  2. See also
    1. Good
    2. Also link to relevant book chapters
  3. External links
    1. Excellent

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:31, 31 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hattie and feedback[edit source]

Suggested references: https://scholar.google.com/scholar?q=hattie+feedback -- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:32, 31 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey! really interesting topic, I personally understand this as I am someone who really needs something to remind me that my hard work is getting results, like at the gym. Anyway I was doing some reading and this article really made sense to me, see what you think https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0747563215000527 --U3202984 (discusscontribs) 11:47, 15 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]