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Excellent - used effectively
Consider linking to your
eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks. Link provided to book chapter
Excellent - summarised with direct link(s) to evidence.
Use a numbered list.
Promising 2-level heading structure - could benefit from further development.
The 4.1 sub-sections could be brought up one level.
Separate theory and research sections may work - but also consider providing integrated theory and research sections based on key themes/topics.
Overview is friendly/accessible. Consider adding:
an example or case study Write using
3rd person perspective. Promising use of case studies.
As the chapter plan goes on, there is less detail.
interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters. Conclusion (the most important section):
hasn't been developed
what might the take-home, practical messages be?
in a nutshell, what are the answer(s) to the question in the sub-title?
A figure is presented.
for APA style,
Figure # should be italics. explains how the image connects to key points being made in the main text. Cite each figure at least once in the main text.
For APA referencing style, check and correct:
Use sentence casing See also
Also link to relevant book chapters External links
Jtneill - 12:31, 31 August 2021 (UTC) Talk - c
Suggested references: https://scholar.google.com/scholar?q=hattie+feedback -- Jtneill - 12:32, 31 August 2021 (UTC) Talk - c
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-- U3202984 ( discuss • contribs) 11:47, 15 October 2021 (UTC)