Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Cognitive behaviour therapy for anxiety

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Topic development feedback[edit source]

The topic development has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is provided below, plus there is a general feedback page. Please also check the chapter's page history to check for editing changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Topic development marks are available via UCLearn. Note that marks are based on what was available before the due date, whereas the comments may also be based on all material available at time of providing this feedback.

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Title[edit source]

  1. The title is correctly worded and formatted
  2. The sub-title is correctly worded and formatted

User page[edit source]

  1. Excellent - used effectively
  2. Description about self provided
  3. Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
  4. Link provided to book chapter

Social contribution[edit source]

  1. None summarised with link(s) to evidence

Headings[edit source]

  1. Basic, 2-level heading structure - could benefit from further development to limit the focus on background information and expand the focus on the target topic

Key points[edit source]

  1. Basic development of key points for each section, with relevant citations
  2. Avoid providing too much background information. Briefly summarise general concepts and provide internal wiki links to other book chapters and/or Wikipedia pages for further information. Then focus most of the content of this chapter on directly answering the core question(s) posed by the chapter sub-title.
  3. Overview - Consider:
    1. focusing the chapter on the 3rd focus question and reducing the emphasis on the 1st two focus questions (there are other chapters and pages about these topics)
    2. consider adding:
      1. a description of the problem and what will be covered
      2. an example or case study
  4. Use British/Australian spelling (e.g., analyze -> analyse; behavior -> behaviour)
  5. The chapter plan seems to have a clinical orientation - but also consider how CBT principles can be applied more generally to help deal with subclinical anxiety.
  6. The types of treatment section probably isn't needed - unless the focus is going to be on how CBT can supplement other approaches in helping people to deal with anxiety
  7. Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters. This is particularly important for this chapter as there are several other chapters about closely related concepts.
  8. Conclusion (the most important section):
    1. hasn't been developed
    2. what might the take-home, practical messages be?
    3. in a nutshell, what are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title?

Figure[edit source]

  1. A figure is presented
  2. Caption uses APA style
  3. Cite each figure at least once in the main text

References[edit source]

  1. OK
  2. For APA referencing style, check and correct:
    1. capitalisation
    2. italicisation
    3. doi formatting

Resources[edit source]

  1. See also
    1. Use bullet-points
    2. Rename links so that they are more user friendly
    3. Include source in brackets after link
  2. External links
    1. Use bullet-points
    2. Rename links so that they are more user friendly
    3. Include source in brackets after link

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 05:47, 14 September 2021 (UTC)