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Basic development of key points for each section, with relevant citations
Avoid providing too much background information. Briefly summarise general concepts and provide internal wiki links to other book chapters and/or Wikipedia pages for further information. Then focus most of the content of this chapter on directly answering the core question(s) posed by the chapter sub-title.
Overview - Consider:
focusing the chapter on the 3rd focus question and reducing the emphasis on the 1st two focus questions (there are other chapters and pages about these topics)
a description of the problem and what will be covered
an example or case study
Use British/Australian spelling (e.g., analyze -> analyse; behavior -> behaviour)
The chapter plan seems to have a clinical orientation - but also consider how CBT principles can be applied more generally to help deal with subclinical anxiety.
The types of treatment section probably isn't needed - unless the focus is going to be on how CBT can supplement other approaches in helping people to deal with anxiety
Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters. This is particularly important for this chapter as there are several other chapters about closely related concepts.
Conclusion (the most important section):
hasn't been developed
what might the take-home, practical messages be?
in a nutshell, what are the answer(s) to the question(s) in the sub-title?