Latest comment: 4 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
The topic development has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is provided below, plus there is a general feedback page. Please also check the chapter's page history to check for editing changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Topic development marks are available via UCLearn. Note that marks are based on what was available before the due date, whereas the comments may also be based on all material available at time of providing this feedback.
Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks.
Add direct links to evidence. To do this: View the page history, select the version of the page before and after your contributions, click "compare selected revisions", and then use this website address as a direct link to evidence for listing on your user page. For more info, see Making and summarising social contributions.
Latest comment: 4 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
Really interesting topic so far, I'm also doing a theory concerned with unbiased emotion try referring to this weeks lecture titled "Virtual Room / recording_20" in the lecture recording tabs for some information and videos provided about psychologicla priming. --Oscar3176498 (discuss • contribs) 20:50, 14 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
Latest comment: 4 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
This chapter has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is provided below, plus there is a general feedback page. Please also check the chapter's page history to check for editing changes made whilst reviewing through the chapter. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Chapter marks will be available later via UCLearn, along with social contribution marks and feedback. Keep an eye on Announcements.
Overall, this chapter provides a basic overview of relevant research.
Some claims are unreferenced (e.g., see the [factual?] tags).
When describing important research findings, consider including a bit more detail about the methodology and indicating the size of effects in addition to whether or not there was an effect or relationship.
Greater emphasis on major reviews and/or meta-analyses would be helpful.
Overall, the quality of written expression is basic.
Avoid starting sentences with a citation unless the author is particularly pertinent. Instead, it is more interesting for the the content/key point to be communicated, with the citation included along the way or, more typically, in brackets at the end of the sentence.
Use 3rd person perspective rather than 1st (e.g., "we") or 2nd person (e.g., "you")[1].
Layout
Sections which include sub-sections should also include an introductory paragraph (which doesn't need a separate heading) before branching into the sub-headings.
No use of embedded in-text interwiki links to Wikipedia articles. Adding interwiki links for the first mention of key words and technical concepts would make the text more interactive.
No use of embedded in-text links to related book chapters. Embedding in-text links to related book chapters helps to integrate this chapter into the broader book project.
Basic/No use of image(s).
No use of table(s).
Good use of feature box(es).
Good use of quiz(zes), although I'm not sure about the last question - can't people be "heightist" unconsciously?
Basic use of case studies or examples.
Grammar
The grammar for some sentences could be improved (e.g., see the [grammar?] tags).
Latest comment: 4 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
The accompanying multimedia presentation has been marked according to the marking criteria. Marks are available via the unit's UCLearn site. Written feedback is provided below, plus see the general feedback page. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below. If you would like further clarification about the marking or feedback, contact the unit convener.
There is too much content, in too much detail, presented within the allocated time frame. Zoom out and provide a higher-level presentation at a slower pace. It is best to do a small amount well than a large amount poorly.
This presentation focuses on unconscious memory, which is a useful example, but the presentations seems to lack a bigger picture focus on unconscious bias and emotion.
The presentation is well structured.
The presentation makes basic use of theory.
The presentation makes basic use of research.
The presentation makes good use of one or more examples or case studies.
The presentation could be improved by making more use of examples or case studies.
A Conclusion slide is presented with a take-home message(s).
The Conclusion only partly fitted within the time limit.
The presentation makes basic use of text based slides with narrated audio.
Consider slowing down and leaving longer pauses between sentences. This can help the viewer to cognitively digest the information that has just been presented before moving on to the next point.
Consider using less text per slide; it is cognitive difficult to listen to fast paced audio and simultaneously read so much text.
Consider using greater intonation to enhance listener interest and engagement.
Consider improving articulation to enhance the clarity of speech.
The visual communication is supplemented in a very basic way by one or more images.
The wording and/or formatting/grammar of the title/sub-title is inconsistent between the name of the video, the opening slide, and/or the book chapter. This is problematic because the video content deviates from the original topic.
Audio recording quality was very good.
Visual display quality was good. Consider using more slides with less text.
This presentation has probably violated the copyrights of image owners as images appear to have been used without permission and/or acknowledgement.
A copyright license for the presentation is provided.
A link to the book chapter is provided.
An active link to the book chapter is not provided.
A link from the book chapter is provided, but it does to a specific section rather than the top of the chapter.
A written description of the presentation is provided.