Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Parricide motivation
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Thought this might be an interesting article for your book chapter! https://www.researchgate.net/publication/321606189_Parricide_An_Introduction_for_Clinical_and_Forensic_Mental_Health_Professionals--U3187486 (discuss • contribs) 02:10, 7 October 2020 (UTC)
Case study suggestion[edit source]
Might be worth looking into the Richardson family murders case, very interesting story. May provide you with insight for your chapter. --U3177510 (discuss • contribs) 12:56, 30 August 2020 (UTC)
Hey there ! When discussing specific case studies, it may be interesting discuss the aftermath of the event - such as, a longitudinal study that follows up on the events and how the murderer (if alive) perceives their actions. :) --U3190016 (discuss • contribs) 14:40, 7 October 2020 (UTC)
Sub-heading advice[edit source]
Hi,
I suggest the sub-heading is too long. The topic is specific for the book chapter, maybe you can change to motivational theories. It is easier for people to read and understand.
--U3178984 (discuss • contribs) 03:20, 28 August 2020 (UTC)
Hey! I'm guessing you're not done but on the topic of subheadings - James recommends that if you're using subheadings you should be using two or more in any given section. Otherwise you have to question whether a subheading is really needed or if it could just be shown under the main heading. Good luck with your chapter!--U3190052 (discuss • contribs) 08:14, 30 August 2020 (UTC)
Overview[edit source]
Hey, just a suggestion that you may want to add an overview section, stating the aim of the chapter kind of like an abstract i.e. the aim of this chapter is to gain a better understanding of why children murder their parents --Laurenpeel (discuss • contribs) 02:42, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 08:57, 14 September 2020 (UTC)
APA referencing[edit source]
Hey, just a reminder that for APA 7th edition if you have three or more authors you need to write: et al., for example where you have written Marleau, Auclair & Millaud, 2006 this should be Marleau et al., (2006).
Also just be careful when you use direct quotes you need to have a page number. Excited to see your final page, very interesting topic. --U3190210 (discuss • contribs) 10:35, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
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Hey, just helped you with the capitalization on your first heading and moved the question mark so that there are no gaps. --U3114726 (discuss • contribs) 05:40, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
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