Latest comment: 4 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
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Social contributions are to chapters and other aspects of the unit than the main chapter you are working on, so I've removed most of the claimed edits
Summarised with indirect links to evidence.
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Under-developed heading structure - develop further to focus more specifically on the chapter sub-title. The focus of this chapter is on CBT and emotion. Not on CBT per se.
Sections which include sub-sections should also include an overview paragraph (which doesn't need a separate heading) before branching into the sub-headings.
Avoid providing too much background information. Briefly summarise generic concepts and provide internal wiki links to further information. Then focus most of the content on directly answering the core question(s) posed by the chapter sub-title.
Basic development of key points for each section, with relevant citations.
Include in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters.
Latest comment: 3 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
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The chapter could benefit from further development of the Conclusion - it should be possible to only read this section and get a good sense of why the topic is important and what is known/recommended. Note that the topic is CBT and emotion, not CBT per se.
This chapter is well under the maximum word count, so there was room for more development.
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Basic coverage of CBT theory is provided, but there is insufficient/limited coverage of emotion. The focus was an anxiety and depression, which is understandable given the common clinical application of CBT. But other aspects of emotion could be reasonably explored such as emotion awareness, emotion expression, and emotion regulation.
A promising aspect were critical views about the limitations of CBT; this could be expanded. For example, what other treatments can it combined with in order to help manage emotion?
What other theoretical perspectives may be useful? e.g., neuroscience understandings of the role of CBT in managing emotion?
Did you actually consult the 1960s Beck texts? If not, these should be secondary citations.
Some relevant research is reviewed, however more detail is needed.
Greater emphasis on major reviews and/or meta-analyses would be helpful.
When describing important research findings, consider including a bit more detail about the methodology and indicating the size of effects in addition to whether or not there was an effect or relationship.
Sections which include sub-sections should also include an introductory paragraph (which doesn't need a separate heading) before branching into the sub-headings.
Learning features
Basic use of embedded in-text interwiki links to Wikipedia articles. Adding more interwiki links for the first mention of key words and technical concepts would make the text more interactive.
Basic use of embedded in-text links to related book chapters. Embedding more links to related book chapters helps to integrate this chapter into the broader book project.
Basic use of image(s). It is unclear how the image used relates to CBT and emotion.
No use of table(s).
Basic use of feature box(es).
Basic use of quiz(zes). The quiz question mentions hypochondria but this isn't explained in the chapter.
Basic use of case studies or examples. More detailed about how CBT was used and how it influenced emotion would be helpful.
What are the practical, take-home messages about how CBT techniques can be used to improve emotion in everyday life?
Grammar
The grammar for some sentences could be improved (e.g., see the [grammar?] tags).
Latest comment: 3 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
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This presentation is promising, but lacks sufficient depth to adequately address the topic (e.g., what is CBT? What is the evidence about its effects on different types of emotions? etc.).
The presentation is well structured.
The presentation makes some use of theory.
The presentation makes no use of research.
The presentation makes basic use of one or more examples or case studies.