Latest comment: 5 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
The topic development has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is provided below, plus there is a general feedback page. Please also check the chapter's page history to check for editing changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Topic development marks are available via UCLearn. Note that marks are based on what was available before the due date, whereas the comments may also be based on all material available at time of providing this feedback.
Note that the summaries don't have to be this in-depth if you don't want them to be e.g., a numbered list with one line summaries and links to evidence are sufficient.
Latest comment: 5 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
Hello,
I found this chapter to be a interesting read. Especially in regards to the changing way society functions with the advent of social media. The fact that a mistake from 15+ years ago can resurface online and so often society fails to accept any apology that may have been made on the part of the (much younger and less experienced) offender. I found your use of theoretical models and case study well done and useful.
I think it's clear you've done a lot of work to your book chapter and it looks great. Have you considered putting in case studies to ensure your explanation is related. --BMPENFOLD (discuss • contribs) 07:41, 20 October 2019 (UTC)Reply
Latest comment: 4 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
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Overall, this is an excellent chapter that successfully uses psychological theory and research to help address a practical, real-world phenomenon or problem. Theory and practice are strengths. The main area for development is the integration of critical review of research.
This chapter is slightly over the maximum word count (e.g., consider abbreviating the Overview; focus questions (repeated) removed from Conclusion).
For additional feedback, see comments below and [ these copyedits].
Relevant research citations are well integrated, but probably lacks detail/depth.
When describing important research findings, consider including a bit more detail about the methodology and indicate the size of effects in addition to whether or not there was an effect or relationship.
Greater emphasis on major reviews and/or meta-analyses would be helpful.
Use third person perspective rather than first person (e.g., "we") or second person (e.g., "you") perspective.
Layout
The chapter is well structured, with the major section using sub-sections.
Sections which include sub-sections should also include an introductory paragraph (which doesn't need a separate heading) before branching into the sub-headings.
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The accompanying multimedia presentation has been marked according to the marking criteria. Marks are available via the unit's Canvas site. Written feedback is provided below, plus see the general feedback page. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below. If you would like further clarification about the marking or feedback, contact the unit convener.
The presentation is fun, easy to follow, and interesting to watch and listen to.
The presentation makes effective use of text and animated image based slides with narrated audio.
Well paced. Excellent pauses between sentences. This helps the viewer to cognitively digest the information that has just been presented before moving on to the next point.
Consider slowing down and leaving longer pauses between sentences. This can help the viewer to cognitively digest the information that has just been presented before moving on to the next point.
Excellent intonation to enhance listener interest and engagement.
Add a title slide.
Minor: There was a spelling error somewhat; and cite refs in alphabetical order.
The font size is sufficiently large to make it easy to read.
The visual communication is effectively supplemented by images.
Communicate the chapter title and sub-title in both the video title and on the opening slide this helps to clearly convey the purpose of the presentation.
Audio recording quality was good although the sound levels varied a bit between pauses and unpauses.
Video recording quality was excellent.
Image source is provided.
A copyright license for the presentation is provided in the video description but not in the meta-data.
A link to the book chapter is provided.
A link from the book chapter is provided.
An excellent written description of the presentation is provided.