Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2018/Chronic pain and maladaptive behaviour
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Hi, I book chapter looks great. I made some APA corrects to your references for you. However, you may still need to add the rest of the authors to the first to references and add the "doi:" to these 2 references: Katz, J., Rosenbloom, B. N., & Fashler, S. (2015). Chronic pain, psychopathology, and DSM-5 somatic symptom disorder. The Candian Journal of Psychiatry, 60, 160-167. Turk, D. C., Swanson, K. S., & Tunks, E. R. (2008). Psychological approaches in the treatment of chronic pain patients - when pills, scalpels and needles are not enough. The Canadian Journal of Psychiatry, 53, 213-223. --GabiK (discuss • contribs) 00:27, 20 October 2018 (UTC)
Hi, I added some extra descriptions to some of your images, you may want to add further descriptions to the rest of the images to link them more with the text. Good Luck. --GabiK (discuss • contribs) 00:53, 20 October 2018 (UTC)
Hi, I've really enjoyed reading your chapter. The specified case studies with the areas was a nice touch. The only thing I would recommend is that there are some concepts that would benefit by having hyperlinks to the relevant wikipedia pages. Otherwise it's a good read and visually has a lot going for it. - U3144461 16:05 21 October 2018.
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Drug use as a form of maladaptive behaviour? managing chronic pain is something that comes to mind that might give weight to some of your thoughts and argument. Although meeting a need to help ease the pain drug use may invariably at some stage turn into dependency or indeed addiction [Refer to the DSM I think substance use disorder is the current preferred term at this stage] Some have suggested that there is currently a pandemic of over prescribed pain medication in the USA [See Oxicontin and other opiate based pain medications Fentinil may be another identified problem drug] The weight of this as an issue that may be useful for you topic is that there are currently more over doses from prescribed medications than illicit drugs in the USA? It may also be useful to weave the work of Jon KAbat Zinn who developed Mindfulness Based Stress Reduction (MBSR) Zinn is considered the Godfather of introducing Mindfulness based practices into western medicine into your writing. MBSR has been used extensively with chronic pain presentations this may be a useful contrast to a maladaptive behaviour ie: drug use, sedentry lifestyles, poor eating habits and nutrition - Luke o
Here are a couple of articles for you. https://www-sciencedirect-com.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/science/article/pii/S0049017202000951 is about the problems that practitioners may face assisting the elderly with chronic pain. https://www-cochranelibrary-com.ezproxy.canberra.edu.au/cdsr/doi/10.1002/14651858.CD002014.pub3/full is about a behavioural treatment for chronic lower back pain (if it doesnt work, go through UC library - Behavioural treatment for chronic low‐back pain (Henschke et al., 2010). It may also be interesting to determine the effects of not treating the chronic pain, either effectively or in an adequate amount of time. Good luck for next week! --U3158984 (discuss • contribs) 04:56, 15 October 2018 (UTC)
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- Photo number 2 is not mentioned while photo number 7 mentioned twice.
- I have changed the intext FIGURE 1 to figure 1 and photo description of figure 1,3,4,5,7,7 to Italic
- This link may help you for future figure addressing: http://libguides.unitec.ac.nz/apareferencing/images-tables-figures
- excluded Figure 1 other figures did not mention in the text and only figure 6 has a description. I suggest you add some description for all photos or mention them in the text.
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