Really interesting topic! However, I suggest putting the title of the book chapter in lower case - Basically, "Stigma and emotion" "What are the emotional effects of being stigmatised?" which is how it is on the motivation and emotion contents page. The reason for this I believe, is that sites like Wiki use lower cases for their titles rather than formal like an essay would. --KR96 (discuss • contribs) 23:44, 3 September 2017 (UTC)
Great topic! Your outline mentioned finding some relevant theories - here are a couple of articles that might help?
The first one talks about the impact of different emotion regulation strategies (rumination, suppression, social support) on stigma outcomes. The second one uses an stress-coping model - if a person appraises the harm of stigma as exceeding their perceived coping resources they will experience stress, which can include emotional reactions such as social anxiety and shame. They suggest interventions targeting these emotional reactions could reduce negative outcomes from stigma. In context of mental illness stigma but might apply more broadly too?
Hatzenbuehler, M. L., Nolen-Hoeksema, S., & Dovidio, J. (2009). How does stigma “get under the skin”? The mediating role of emotion regulation. Psychological Science, 20, 1282-1289. doi:10.1111/j.1467-9280.2009.02441.x
Rüsch, N., Corrigan, P. W., Powell, K., Rajah, A., Olschewski, M., Wilkniss, S., & Batia, K. (2009). A stress-coping model of mental illness stigma: II. Emotional stress responses, coping behavior and outcome. Schizophrenia research, 110, 65-71. http://dx.doi.org/10.1016/j.schres.2009.01.005
--u3122707 (discuss • contribs) 22:59, 25 August 2017 (UTC)
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Sections which include sub-sections should also include an overview paragraph (which doesn't need a separate heading) before branching into the sub-headings.
Very detailed 3-level heading structure - in general, this is good, but perhaps it is overly detailed and make break up the flow. A general guide is that if there is only one paragraph, except the Overview and Conclusion, it probably doesn't justify a separate heading.
May need to be more selective about which theories to focus on e.g., what are the most important 2 to 4, with briefer mention of the others. In general, stronger chapters are more selective of the top theories and provide good coverage about these, rather than trying to cover a little bit about lots of different theories.