Hi there! You have made such a great start on your book chapter! Don't forget to APA reference the image you have used of the cyclist being swooped by the magpie, .i.e. Figure 1. Additionally, change the current 'Figure 1' to 'Figure 2'. Well done and good luck!
--u3066780 (discuss • contribs) 2:10, 4 September 2017 (UTC)
looks like it's all coming along great, though I'd suggest maybe putting in a case study, just to show off some examples of the emotions in your chapter. James has a link to how to do the coding for seperate boxes. Hope this helps :)
RainbowUnicorn97 (discuss • contribs) 11.07pm, 21 October 2017 (UTC)
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More proofreading is needed to fix typos and bring the quality of written expression closer to a professional standard.
Spelling can be improved - e.g., see the [spelling?] tags.
The grammar for some sentences could be improved - e.g., see the [grammar?] tags.
Numbers under 10 should be written in words (e.g., five); numbers 10 and over should be written in numbers (e.g., 10)
Direct quotes need page numbers.
Check and correct APA style for direct quotes of 40 or greater words
Use APA style for Figure captions
Use APA style for formatting of citations.
Did you consult the original 19th century citations - very unlikely. Learn to how to cite these texts. These citations should be to James (1892/year of publication consulted) and James (1899/year of publication consulted) not William (1892) etc.
References are not in full APA style e.g.,
Check and correct capitalisation
Check and correct italicisation
Also provide author second initials where available
Do not include issue numbers for journals which are continuously numbered within volumes.