Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2024/Groups and individual motivation enhancement

Heading casing

Hi CharlotteLane55. FYI, the recommended Wikiversity heading style uses sentence casing. For example: Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory Here's an example chapter with correct heading casing: Growth mindset development -- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:50, 17 August 2024 (UTC)

Topic development feedback

The topic development submission has been reviewed according to the marking criteria. Written feedback is below, plus see the general feedback page. Please also check the page history for changes made whilst reviewing the chapter plan. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below and/or contacting the reviewer. Marks are available via UCLearn. Marks are based on the latest version before the due date.

1. Title The title is correctly worded and formatted 2. Headings Promising 2-level heading structure – could benefit from further development by expanding the structure Useful distinction between enhance/reduce Emphasises theory rather than research; aim for a balance; these headings are OK if research about these theories is covered within each section Introduction heading is probably not needed - cover this material in either the Overview or subsequent sections Headings should not also be hyperlinks Consider adopting closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings 3. Overview Very good - Scenario, image, evocative description of the problem/topic, relevant psychological theory/research, and focus questions A scenario or case study is presented in a feature box at the start of this section Aim for a brief, evocative description of the problem/topic Use 3rd person perspective (except 1st/2nd person can work for feature boxes/scenarios) Closer alignment between the sub-title, focus questions, and top-level headings is recommended 4. Key points Partial development of key points for some sections, with some relevant citations Move links to external resources into the External links section For sections which include sub-sections, include the key points for an overview paragraph prior to branching into the sub-headings Strive for an integrated balance of theory and research, with practical examples Use APA style 7th edition for citations with three or more authors (i.e., FirstAuthor et al., year) Conclusion (the most important section): Hasn't been developed 5. Figure A relevant figure is presented and captioned Cite each figure at least once in the main text Consider decreasing image size to make it less dominant in relation to the text 6. Learning feature Promising use of in-text interwiki links for the first mention of key terms to relevant Wikipedia articles and/or to other relevant book chapters Promising use of example(s)/case study(ies) The opening case study is long; consider abbreviating or splitting into different sections throughout the chapter Consider including more examples/case studies, quiz question(s), table(s) etc. 7. References Excellent For APA referencing style, check and correct: page numbers should be separated by an en-dash (–) rather than a hyphen (-) 8. Resources See also Not developed External links Not developed 02]]) 9. User page Excellent – used effectively Excellent description about self provided Consider linking to your eportfolio page and/or any other professional online profile or resume such as LinkedIn. This is not required, but it can be useful to interlink your professional networks. Link provided to book chapter 10. Social contribution At least three different types of contributions with direct link(s) to evidence If adding the second or subsequent link to a page (or a talk/discussion page), create a direct link like / Add direct links to evidence. To do this: View the page history, select the version of the page before and after your contributions, click "compare selected revisions", and then use this website address as a direct link to evidence for listing on your user page. For more info, see Making and summarising social contributions.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:50, 17 August 2024 (UTC)