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Some claims are unreferenced (e.g., see the [factual?] tags).
Relevant research is reviewed and discussed in relation to theory in a basic way.
When describing important research findings, consider including a bit more detail about the methodology and indicate the size of effects in addition to whether or not there was an effect or relationship.
Greater emphasis on major reviews and/or meta-analyses would be helpful.
Overall, the quality of written expression is reasonably good
The chapter benefited from a well developed Overview and Conclusion, with clear focus question(s) and take-home messages.
Layout
For numbered lists, use Wikiversity formatting per Tutorial 1.
Learning features
Basic use of embedded interwiki links to Wikipedia articles. Adding interwiki links for the first mention of key words and technical concepts would make the text more interactive.
No use of embedded links to related book chapters. Embedding links links to related book chapters helps to integrate this chapter into the broader book project.
Basic use of images.
No use of tables.
Excellent use of feature boxes.
Basic use of quizzes.
Basic use of case studies or examples.
Grammar
Check and correct use of ownership apostrophes (e.g., individuals vs. individual's vs individuals').[1].
Latest comment: 4 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
The accompanying multimedia presentation has been marked according to the marking criteria. Marks are available via the unit's Canvas site. Written feedback is provided below, plus see the general feedback page. Responses to this feedback can be made by starting a new section below. If you would like further clarification about the marking or feedback, contact the unit convener.
The presentation is interesting to watch and listen to.
The presentation makes effective use of text and animated image based slides with narrated audio.
Reasonably well paced.
Consider slowing down and leaving longer pauses between sentences. This can help the viewer to cognitively digest the information that has just been presented before moving on to the next point.
The font size is sufficiently large to make it easy to read.
The visual communication is effectively supplemented by images.