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Some paragraphs are overly long. Each paragraph should communicate one key idea in three to five sentences.
Avoid one sentence paragraphs. A paragraph should typically consist of three to five sentences.
Avoid starting sentences with a citation unless the author is particularly pertinent. Instead, it is more interesting for the the content/key point to be communicated, with the citation included along the way or, more typically, in brackets at the end of the sentence.
The chapter benefited from a well developed Overview and Conclusion, with clear focus question(s) and take-home messages.
Hi there, Fantastic chapter ! I might just suggest you pay more attention to detail with your APA formatting. For instance, one of your tables was missing a description. Overall, really well done. U3177123 (discuss • contribs) 11:29, 12 October 2020 (UTC)