Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2018/Loss aversion
- 1 Heading casing
- 2 Topic development feedback
- 3 Feedback on chapter
- 4 References
- 5 APA figures and reference list
- 6 Comment
- 7 Chapter review and feedback
- 8 Multimedia feedback
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Topic development feedback
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Feedback on chapter
Lucy here is a link to an article on loss aversion http://freakonomics.com/2005/11/07/loss-aversion-in-the-nfl/ Your topic is really interesting and you've already made headway but I think your page could benefit from a case study to give the reader an easy way of understanding the topic. Hopefully the link will provide inspiration for the case study. U3037801 (discuss • contribs) 07:15, 9 October 2018 (UTC)
Hey there, Really like the start of the start with Imagine this, I did a similar thing with mine. I also like that use of boxes for focus questions and the quote. You may plan on doing it already but I suggest extending the topics in the consequences of loss aversion and forming it into a paragraph structure. --Kunal Kumar - University of Canberra (discuss • contribs) 06:46, 21 October 2018 (UTC)
I noticed a few of your references didn't have dois or they weren't linked properly. I updated the second and third references as an example and fixed a few formatting issues (e.g., italicising journal name and volume number). Also, issue numbers only need to be included if the journal is paginated by issue (usually not the case). Here's a helpful link: http://blog.apastyle.org/apastyle/2011/10/how-to-determine-whether-a-periodical-is-paginated-by-issue.html. Good luck with your chapter, it looks like a really interesting topic! --U3122470 (discuss • contribs) 03:42, 12 October 2018 (UTC)
APA figures and reference list
Your book chapter looks great so far, great work! Below I have just provided an example of how to reference the first image you have included. I did some research, and I think this would be a good caption for it.
Figure 1. Daniel Kahneman, who won a Nobel Prize in Economics for developing prospect theory.
For figure 2, you might want to write a caption that explains whats going on in the graph.
I have edited your book chapter images and just put figure 1 and figure 2 in APA style, so all you need to do is add a caption.
Also, I don't believe you need the inverted commas for loss aversion throughout your headings, as its clear what your discussing! :)
For your reference list, to follow APA guidelines, you need to make sure the volume number and journal is in italics, and for the title of the journal articles you don't need to have it capitalised. I have edited your page and fixed this up for you. For future reference (pun intended) haha, this may be helpful: https://canberra.libguides.com/referencing/apa
I hope this helps, good luck with it!
Hi there, just wanted to let you know that I put a comment in your figure 1, just suggesting to put a small description there or have it right next to a paragraph explaining the figure. Looking really good, I really like your focus questions box :) --MaddieCarleton (discuss • contribs) 23:15, 18 October 2018 (UTC)
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