Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2018/Betrayal and emotion
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- 2 Topic development feedback
- 3 Article, suggested headings, references and see also section
- 4 Chapter review and feedback
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Hi there, I think this is a great topic I look forward to seeing the progression of this page! Although I would recommend using the chapter template that James has provided, it is described in tutorial 1 how to find and use it. I have also found this article which may be of use to you, it discusses betrayal in close relationships and some of the emotions related to that. http://faculty.wcas.northwestern.edu/eli-finkel/documents/Finkeletal_2002_000.pdf good luck on your page :) --U3160212 (discuss • contribs) 04:14, 1 September 2018 (UTC)
Hi, this is a new feedback. I liked how you discussed the different types of betrayal and how you also included the individual differences in regards to people's emotions. However, it would have been more helpful if you expanded on the The Community Resiliency Model and other models related to this topic. Overall, this was really interesting to read! --U3160221 (discuss • contribs) 11:19, 1 September 2019 (UTC)
Topic development feedback
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Article, suggested headings, references and see also section
Good progression on your book chapter so far! I have found a relevant article that you could use:
Finkel, E. J., Rusbult, C. E., Kumashiro, M., & Hannon, P. A. (2002). Dealing with betrayal in close relationships: does commitment promote forgiveness? Journal of Personality and Social Psychology, 82, 956–974. Doi: 10.1037//0022-3518.104.22.1686
This article has some great research mentioned in the 'Norm Violations and the Experience of Betrayal' section, which really relates to your book chapter. They discuss how victims and perpetrators both experience particular emotions after betrayal, some similar, some different. Perhaps you could look at having the headings: 'Emotions of victims' and 'Emotions of perpetrators'. This may give your book chapter some more depth - by also recognising the emotions experienced by perpetrators of betrayal.
I also added the wikipedia page 'Betrayal' onto your 'see also' section, fixed your reference list (made the journal names and volumes italicised, uncapitalised article titles). You also don't need the issue numbers there but I left them incase you wanted to keep them. If you need any further help with APA 6th edition referencing this is what I often use: https://canberra.libguides.com/referencing/apa
I hope this helps! Good luck!
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